Blood, Guts and Redemption

Artich #1 · Apr 24th, 2023 · · · Prologue ·

The two stallions slowly made theire way over to the cottage as Autumn gave Note Taker a rundown of the situation. Note Taker's eyes locked on to the small filly as they passed them, he ran multiple scenarios through his head to what could have truly happened.

"Before you go in, I must warn you, it's not a pretty sight." Autumn warned. Note Taker simply nodded his head and entered the building.

"Hello, my name is Note Taker. I am aware you know what happened here and I need you to tell me what happened." Note Taker said in a calming tone. The filly stayed silent, not making a sound. Note Taker observed her behavior and concluded whatever she saw, has bput her in so much shock, she couldn't even speak. This would be troublesome for Note Taker. Then He then had an idea, he signaled for a mare to bring him a pad of paper and a pencil. The mare quickly gave both items to Note Taker.

"Are you able to draw me what you saw?" Note Taker asked. The small filly very slowly nodded her head as she gently took the pad and pencil from him. Then she began to draw something. The filly didn't even look at the page but it was clear that a full imagine was being made and not just random scribbles. In no time at all the filly gave Note Taker the paper, he looked down on it in slight horror and disgust.

Unbeknownst to the ponies, dark figures watched them from the trees, studying who they were as individuals.

The time ticked by and everything fell into peaceful silence. The silence lasted about fifteen minutes before three knocks were heard on the door.

"Princess, this is an urgent letter that just came in for you." The guard said in a monotone voice.

"Thank you, please put it on my desk and I will look at it in a moment."

"Huh, It's from Detective Autumn. Probably about some kind of breaknew lead into what that happened in thate Castle that I don't know about yet." Twilight assumed to herself. She curiously opened the envelope and pulled out the first piece of paper.

"It is with great concern that I write you this letter. As of last night there has been a double homicide in the Everfree Forest Experience Holiday Home. Two ponies have been brutally murdered and dismembered in the home. We have no idea who or what did it, but from their injuries it looks like an animal attack. But when we discovered the bodies they had been arranged in to some kind of circle."

"We don't know why they were positioned like this, so we can only assume the attacker or someone else put them in place. There is one witness, the two ponies daughter of the two ponies. She couldn't tell us what she saw, but we could get her to draw it. I have no idea what it is, so if you can aid us in anyway please do so."

"Sincerely, Detective Autumn."

Twilight, with a concerned look on her face, put the paper down and reached into the envelope again with her magic and pulled outy the second piece of paper. She quickly unfolded it to see what the drawing could be. When her eyes laid upon the drawing, her blood ran cold and as her eyes turned to pin pricks. She shot up from her desk and rushed out of her personnel quarters tof her room.

"Wait! Princess where are you going?" Luster called out to her teacher, but she was too late, Twilight, was already out of ear shot.

Luster, looked back to her teachers desk and saw the drawinglast piece of paper thatTwilight, had looked at, before it had fallen to the floor. She got up and made her way over to it. She slowly picked it up and looked at it. It was a crude childish drawing of a tall thin creature, with a large skull for a head with a mouth full of teeth and two large antlers protruding from it's skull. The picture showed this creature ripping into two ponies.

Big improvements since the previous story.
Better flow and word spelling.
Keep it up wordsmith👍.

Comment posted by Artich deleted Apr 24th, 2023

Glitched Grim

Glitched Grim #3 · Apr 24th, 2023 · 3 · · Prologue ·

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By the opening and the description of the creatures attack, I’m wondering if this story is going to be more horror centered then the last.

Glitched Grim

Glitched Grim #4 · Apr 25th, 2023 · 3 · · Rebirth ·

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Good old cults and them bringing impending doom to their homelands.

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Status L #5 · Jul 9th, 2023 · 1 · · Rebirth ·

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Always read the warnings if you don't you will end up either a corpse, slave or worse.

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Status L #6 · Jul 9th, 2023 · 1 · · Freedom ·

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Spooky scary canibal standing in the cupboard watching you have sex waiting for the hunger to passa, you might be next distracted and soon to end as the sheets begin to smell of what you will be next.

Caniputmyballsinyojaws

Caniputmyballsinyojaws #7 · Jul 10th, 2023 · 1 · · Freedom ·

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oof dying while getting railed or doing the railing Is a bad way to go man
thank god mc did not kill during the smashing

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Status L #8 · Jul 12th, 2023 · 1 · · Return To The Everfree ·

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He is still suffering from hunger right?
Because I have not noticed it yet.

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Status L #9 · Jul 25th, 2023 · 1 · · A Strolle Through The Forest ·

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So the cult has returned.
Also it seems he is not as effected by hunger as he used to be.

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Status L #10 · Aug 4th, 2023 · 1 · · Interlude ·

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Did those damn zealots succeed in their attempts to become wendigos themselves?

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Status L #11 · Oct 24th, 2023 · 2 · · Confrontation ·

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breaking news!
A large monster that seems to be a mismatched child of a deer and a minotaur has been spotted in the Everfree forest more on the next page.

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