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The universe's strangest individual.

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A well know and ruthless Black Dalek Commander called Silen is set on a infiltration mission with his squad to exterminate an Arcadian refugee center. But not long after the Moment occurs purging all life on and around Gallifrey, The mission all for nothing.

Silen find himself crippled but alive in a desert and goes in to stasis to preserve his life. Years later he is found and brought to a museum in Canterlot to only be awoken by a certain yellow and pink mare.


This story does not have the Doctor in it. It is a standalone Dalek story. This story will be sad and humanize the Dalek making it sympathetic. This story was heavily inspired by the new series Doctor Who episode in season 1 called "Dalek" so a lot of lines might be from that.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

This is a good story; I'm a really big Doctor Who and Dalek fan. :twilightsmile:

Hey this seems interesting keep it up

OK this is gonna be a nitpick

In the Doctor Who universe when a person goes back in time they pick up background time travel radiation that what the Daleks use as a power source meeting at some point of time Flutter shy would have to travel through time To gain the background time travel radiation for the Dalek to exorbitant .

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I'm going to change it to something else. So it will still make sense. But thank you for pointing that out.

Nice hope to see more soon

Damn this got me excited can't wait for the next one

Aw men I didn't expect it to end that quick

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Sorry, I hust couldn't come up with a way yo end the story and I didn't want to leave it unfinished.

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It's ok it's hard to combine the doctor who series with this because of how different the story are between them if done wrong the story will probably turn out trash

A short story that could do with some tweaking, as I felt some parts went a bit too quickly for my liking. But for your second story, it’s worth a read.

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