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Applejack and Rainbow Dash's Bet

Applejack and Rainbow Dash make a bet. See who wins!

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overdue

overdue #1 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · ·

it's the most positive wholesome pure good thing i've seen in the whole site so far

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #2 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · ·

This was certainly very cute. I appreciate your attempt to write something simple and comfy like this. My biggest complaint would probably be that it felt like it was over too quickly. I would have liked to see the story go a bit slower and take more time to let the comfiness simmer before ending it. Also, some of the dialogue felt a bit forced, but it wasn't that distracting.

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