• Member Since 13th Jul, 2015
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RobynJSwift


Nopony interesting, just a reader... with a canon villain character obsession.

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Starlight Glimmer ran a small village of ponies she convinced to give up their destinies. She also tried to rip apart the most important friendship in all Equestria. But here she was, her first night in a castle with the same princess who convinced her to abandon her revenge in return for friendship. Now that things were settling, she can't seem to believe that she's being pardoned for her actions. Luckily, Twilight is there to help her resolve these thoughts.

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“I was so sure this was related to my cutie mark, that maybe my punishment would be serving you with my magic or forcing me to spell-weave for you.”

You are not that stupid to actually believe that right?
Like you, i love magic and casting spells and stuff.
Why would i get somebody else to take that away
from me? Especially as a punishment for somebody
else who enjoys doing it?
Think Starlight, Think!

"I can’t expect to help with years over the course of a few minutes"

Actually, we both can do time travel so we might be able to figure something out there . .

Aw, that was sweet.

Aww, short but sweet. I loved it! It's an amazing first story!

Damn, for a first story, this is a really good first attempt!

So, my issue with this story, is it isn't sappy enough.

How dare you not make a fully-fleshed out story with major feel goods in the end, and instead leaving Starlight still tense but more reassured with herself and her new friends decisions. It should always end with the biggest of hugs and no more character development.

I hate feeling tense but slightly reassured at the end of my stories. Stop this character development nonsense and playing with my heartstrings.

In all seriousness though, Good job. Earned a favrit

I hope you consider doing your project with Starlight Glimmer! This vignette was a marvelous teaser!

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