Fluttershy of the Dragonlands is a beautiful pink and light yellow dragoness princess to the Dragonlands. Her wings were that of a butterfly, unlike any the dragon kind had seen. She was revered for her beauty, and had many a suitor due to being next in line for the throne.
An unusual frost fall threatens the Dragonlands, so she seeks to help her people any way she can.
One day, however, her father catches her in the act of helping, and after a terrible, ill-fated argument with him, she flies away in tears, finding herself lost in a distant wood. There, she discovers a terrible, atrocious secret about her family and their reign, and learns of why and how the frost came about.
Can the shy princess be brave and stand up to her father and end the frost?
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Damn ponies. Fucking everything up for everycreature. Pretty sure this is before Heath's Warming Eve.
Fucking asshole. Not sorry about the language.
Well this should be interesting
Hmm, this was certainly dramatic, but I felt it was held back by its simplicity, in that we're spoonfed flashbacks of the exact scheming that happened, Fluttershy doesn't for a moment question what she's doing, and things seem too easy.
I think this really could've done with some secondary characters for Fluttershy to talk to about the situation and what she should do, and to assist her in the end.