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SnowOriole


I just don't know what went wrong!

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Ah, the last year of high school, when students start pondering their futures and similar existential crises. 17-year-old Applejack has... other problems. She's a long way from home, for one, and she knows home is the only place she's going back to after high school in the big city. Applejack is okay with this, but when she sees Rainbow Dash, soaring ever high, achieving her dreams, that doesn't stop her from wondering what it's like to fly.

Oh, and she's also in love with Rainbow, who's leaving the country in less than a year. That too.


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Now with a new cover drawn by me!
Rated Teen for mild profanity, instances of underage drinking, and a couple suggestive jokes/moments.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 15 )

What a captivating read! Your characterization of all the characters are spot-on. The only thing that should be added is the Romance tag, but besides that, there are no other issues I see with this. Can’t wait to read more! :ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2:

Your writing is beautiful and engaging from the get-go, and I’m loving where this story is going. Great work, and thank you for sharing it <3

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OH I'm an idiot I actually forgot the Romance tag :rainbowlaugh: thanks so much for telling me
And thank you for the kind words!! They mean a lot to me :pinkiehappy:

Applejack soon realises that some people still, in fact, do have dreams.

Well that's a line that hits like a truck.

THIS IS REALLY WONDERFUL!!!!:pinkiehappy: I really like how you stick to the characters and describe the dialogue.. This is a very addictive FR!! I'm looking forward to continuing!!!!!![:twilightsheepish:

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ahhh thank you lots! >_< :heart: I try really hard on the characters so it makes me happy to hear that!

I'm happy to see this get an update.

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Aww thanks for waiting! I write slow but I'm definitely going to see this through to the end (which is actually in sight now) :pinkiehappy:

I love all the characterisation and imagery so far!! :rainbowkiss:

Loved this chapter! I love the idea of AJ joining an art-adjacent club as well:heart: I loved Fluttershy and AJ’s little interaction as well, it’s rare they get to interact in fics! :rainbowkiss:

I love how you are incorporating episodes into this story in w way that feels natural!

Waa!! I just finished reading this and it is now one of my favourite fanfictions! I always appreciate good character work and everyone is so themselves here, all while fitting into the universe you made! Good job, friend! :rainbowdetermined2::heart::ajsmug:

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Aww, thank you so much! :rainbowkiss: It means a lot!

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