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SnowOriole


I just don't know what went wrong!

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Diamond Tiara is an Earth pony. One that can't take care of a flower, apparently.


Written for a Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Contest!

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Comments ( 20 )

Sweet little story, thumbs up! Though I like to think Silver is mostly only mean out of following Diamond Tiara, so her bit at the end felt a little off to me personally.

This was a refreshing change from the crap I usually read. Well done!

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Hm maybe, I really just threw it in there for comedic effect :rainbowlaugh: Thanks though, I'll keep it in mind next time!

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:

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No right or wrong when it comes to this sort of thing of course.

From the name and description, I expected a way sadder story. I'm pleasantly surprised, and I got to learn a bit about gardening!

This was fun.

This was very nice, one of my favorite pairings to read about.

Thankyou for this lovely one-shot.

Yesterday I was feeling quite crap as an old maple tree I was taking care off seemed to be doing poorly.

But nature can come back, yes?
Time and love.

What a great exploration of Earth Pony magic! My pet interpretation is very close to yours-Earth Pony magic is subtle and nuanced, and earth ponies themselves can have diverse individual talents!

That was a nice story.

Such a sweet story!
As a fan of the earth ponies I really enjoyed reading it!
Thank you <3

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ty for the kind comment :D

That was so sweet.

Happy 2nd Anniversary!

A bit late to be commenting on this story, but personally I enjoyed it.

Considering this supposably takes place before the events of COTTM, perhaps Diamond Tiara was too quick to warm to Apple Bloom after the latter agreed to help her grow the flower, but that's a minor niggle. You can only do so much in just under 2k words, and what was here was very sweet indeed! :pinkiehappy:

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thanks so much for the comment! Yeah, it's a bit of an old story, but your comment made me reread it and I found myself enjoying it despite seeing where I could improve on it now. I appreciate the kind words!

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