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As it turns out because he is a being of pure chaos he is completely unaccountable for his actions.

But is that really all there is to it?

Inspired by a story from naturalbornderpy:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/358217/discord-goes-to-heaven

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Since when have details ever slow those girls down?

Good concept. Funny story. Grammar could be better. Pacing is fast. Pink Delight speaks in passive and it's kind of hard to read when only Discord actually speaks out loud in their conversation.
I rate it a good⁄10.

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