Applejack wakes up early, but she doesn’t regret it.
Written for the ApplePie Contest.
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bahatumay
Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
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This was a cute little story, and I definitely enjoyed reading it, although I was a bit put off by some of the stranger elements you included. I may be drastically misinterpreting some of the plot elements you were hinting at, but it seemed to me that you wanted to build off of the series finale timeskip, but still veered away from that ending so much that it felt a bit contrived. I really don't think you needed to do that. You could have done this story exactly the same, just with slightly different character motivations, and I think it would have been much more natural.
aww, that's how you know some time has passed!
augh, adorable
it's interesting that Applejack is just doing for Pinkie what her friends had to do for her in "Applebuck Season", though the story hints at a heavier root cause
oof, and that is a nice melancholy note, that the two mares are finding grieving and loss to be another thing that they have in common as they get older
hehehe, would not surprise me if this was the dozenth attempt, and the first that Applejack noticed
aww, now that is forward in a Pinkie way
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yeah, the dynamics are very different from dating a stranger! a friend she's been so close to for so many years, i imagine it feels more like slipping on a comfortable glove
hehe, cute Pinkie Pie line
aww, very sweet, and just really gets into the earthy, grounded ApplePie dynamic. nothing fancy or melodramatic, just two mares who support each other and love making each other happy, with plenty of these little cute domestic moments. very adorable, and a great example of so many things to love about this ship, thank you for it!