This story is a sequel to The King Of Pizza
Here is the much awaited sequel to The King Of Pizza!
A year ago, King Sombra was sent to earth instead of being killed by The Elements Of Harmony.
He landed in a human girl's house. The girl's name was Esmeralda.
They got along with each other most of the time.
And now, in The King Of Pizza 2, their adventures will continue.
Uhh...okay?
they are almost like a old married couple eh?
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Now I can imagine one of Esme's friends making a joke about that.
Also, what do you think of the cover art?
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kinda funny
She blushes and turns her face away as it becomes red. "R-r-ride you?!"
" Yes, so you don't lose energy by walking up the stairs. "
"Oh, you meant that type of riding."
LOL!!!
That was kinda funny
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I'm out of ideas for the next chapter...
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How about them getting closer? Or sombra getting homesick?
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That's actually a great idea! Thanks!
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Youre welcome. There was another idea but it wouldn't fit with the setting
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Oh?
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The riding getting true
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That will happen...somewhere near the end.
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Okay
youre welcome
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I liked how Esmeralda felt jealous of Sombra getting attention after hearing he was hired on the spot, I do hope she'll gain the courage to reveal her feelings to him.
And I can't wonder if Sombra were to turn her into a pony, what kind of species would she be turned into be it an Earth pony, unicorn, Pegasus, a bat pony or a Crystal pony? This is just my over active imagination popping up crazy ideas, this story is yours after all. xD
Loved seeing them bonding over gaming tablets and I gotten a good chuckle from Sombra feeling home sick.
Keep up the awesome work my friend. Here's an idea for a future chapter, have Sombra react to classic Monty Python sketches such as The Lumberjack song, the dead parrot, the Spanish Inquisition, the Viking spam café, some scenes from The Holy Grail movie such as the Black Knight, the French tauter, the tale of Sir Lancelot, the killer rabbit and the 3 questions while watching these clips he would be laughing so hard that he can't breathe.
If you're not interested in using my ideas, I understand.
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I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed this chapter, and as for your question, I think there was a scene in the prequel where Sombra turned Esmeralda into a pegasus.
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That's a great idea! Thanks!
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I'll have to go back and re-read if it did happened or not.
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You're very welcome!