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VoxAdam


It's the journey that counts, not the destination.

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Upon a successful occupation of Canterlot by the Storm Forces, Commander Tempest Shadow finds herself a recipient of the generosity of her lord, and lover, the Storm King. A surprise awaits at the end of the night...


Proofread by MagicMan.

Very much not my headcanon, this nonetheless was an odd little idea I had trotting through my brain that wouldn't let me go, considering how few Tempest Shadow x Storm King stories there are.

T rating owes itself to the largely softcore nature of any sexual content. Tagged "Fetish" for mild butt inflation, mainly an idea of MagicMan's, which ought to be regarded as an Equestrian equivalent of breast expansion.

With apologies for the Chickification of Tempest Shadow.

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Comments ( 7 )

Love the story

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Thank you. :pinkiesmile: It's a different kind of story for me to experiment with. What did you like about it?

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I enjoyed the fact that the plot was actually really good there was sex but it didn't overshadow the story I like how you wrote their characters

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Why, thanks again. :twilightsmile: I had considered making the sex more explicit when I was writing this, but I felt it'd detract from the focus on the characters' feelings for one another. Tempest Shadow x Storm King is no headcanon of mine, as mentioned in the story summary. However, I was surprised to find it written seemingly nowhere, which is unusual on a website as filled with smut as Fimfiction.

I'm always fond of the idea that bad guys need love too. :raritywink:

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I actually believe bad guys need love too. And I think Tempest and Strom king would have been good together

Few things cause me as much pleasure as seeing the bad guys win and celebrating in a big way, it's a surprise that this is the only ShadowStorm job, although if you think about it better it's not really a surprise the people in this place are biased towards the popular ships , a pity, but not like this story, even though I didn't understand the game of horn, is it a fetish or something?
9.0/10 👍

I need more Stormpest... good work. A teeny OOC, but to make the relationship work Stormy's gotta be a lil sweeter. Thank you for the food.

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