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Bendy


I like big ponies and I cannot lie.

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Jeez that's fucked up

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Yeah... I think my next story will nice and wholesome.

Wholesome human x pony... rather than this...

Yeah didn't think this would turn out this way

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There's no comedy tag. So, it's a bit of a warning.

So our intrepid human over of big quadruped butts found himself in the Convergence Universe? What's next? The magical, multicolored psychic space squids of Alpha-Zeti-9? The reverse-gender universe? The universe where ponies are nocturnal and Luna is the elder sister? The anthro universe?

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A wholesome one, next time. I think.

And yeah, it's inspired by the likes of the conversion bureau.

Comment posted by Bendy deleted Dec 13th, 2021

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Sorry man.

I'll try to make a nice one next time. I don't ask if you 'enjoyed' this stoy.

The Imperium of Man is so gonna Exterminatus this PATHETIC Equine World to DUST!!!!!!!!!!

Lol, the only excuse for not cumming inside Rainbow Dash... is that you could have cum in any of the other Mane 5 instead!

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Only good ponies should be cummed inside. Not these evil ones. They don't get any cum.


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I agree. Let it burn.

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Yeah but it did get a reaction so good job

I kinda wanna be a pony's slave...

I can't. I felt sorry for myself reading, and absolutely nothing about the plot. Every single sentence broke my suspension of disbelief.
It felt like reading about myself reading it. The title and description were good.
Bendy what happened?

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Sorry to disappoint but the story was a brief experiment into another field I normally do not do for the most part. And it was quickly thrown together.

Interesting. I would subsitute the whole servitude attitude to something like meatbags or ants. And I would also add something like "we feed on your life energy(in form of pain, sex or both )" attitude to argue why they haven't wiped out humanity, yet.
I guess one might argue the reasoning behind such brutal and out of character storytelling. I think it is the need to reflect on reality through fiction. Situations people are not ready to face are told in fiction and harden the hearts of their readers.

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I upset some readers with this one.

It's also kind of implied that the ponies are not normally like this. (something made them evil) I wanted to leave it as a mystery as to why the ponies suddenly became evil. It does make a reference to the Conversion Bureau stories, with the threats she made against his race.

Huk

Yikes... :twilightoops:! That was certainly different from your usual stories...

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It's inspired by some evil OOC stories. Such as TCB (conversion bureau) but I took it to its logical conclusion.

Huk

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Yeah, that's what I thought. Still, dark...

Bruh what the hell bruh

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I tried my hand at something grimdark.

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to be completely honest, this equestria is far better than most imperium's colony planets

Hmm, You know this is actually kinda tame and might be able to go on my youtube channel, rated teen. Because there's no explicit action and they only talk about cumming inside.

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I am careful about ratings. I feel it M rated in some ways.

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