Spike's dream came true. Rarity wants to be his girlfriend. He couldn't believe it at first, but it turns out Rarity was serious. Of course Spike accepted, after all that's all he ever wanted
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Yes, sounds about right.
Dark little story. Simple, if a bit rough, though easy enough to read.
I would suggest learning a bit more about paragraph formation.
You keep writing and there will be people who will keep reading.
Oh, and don't forget to source your cover art. Doesn't matter if you created it, used AI, contracted the work, or just found it somewhere on the interwebs.
This should be M.
Reminder:
Rarity is canonically 8 years older than spike.
He was 6 and she was 14 when twilight came to pony ville.
That means she was more than double his age when she
started using him for free labour . .
with him at 8 she was still double his age at 16 and even
when you double his age to 12 she was still 20 at that time.
If you are against foalcon, you can not be for Sparity.
11780701
I thought the mane 6 were in their 20s
11780701
Yes plus someone should have killed that crush before twilight even got to rule everyone. It one thing to crush on a celebrity that you will hardly ever see in real life. Most of those crushes die over time. But rarity next door and doing nothing to discouraged him and him not probably having the courage to make an official move towards besides trying to impress her and hanging around her most of the time.
11780701 incorrect, the mane 6 are all adults at the start of the show. Idk about spikes age if it had any cannon mentions but the mane six are all in their 20’s
There's no way this is going to last long. Rarity can't keep Spike lock away forever. There are too many creatures that cares about him, and Twilight is eventually going to worry and get suspicious.
One way or another, the truth of what Rarity is really doing to Spike will get revealed and I would love to see what happens after that.
11780701
Twilight hatch spike when she was about three or four and by the end of the season Twilight is 24 spikes in his 20s rarity might be the oldest but spike would still be over 18.
And it's there is a whole episode where these says I'm not the one for you. Spikers canonically abused by everyone because they use them as the comic relief
I like your story but it was a little too fast. I felt like I missed something or there was something that didn't catch on in the whole situation. But if you do make a second story, it'll be interesting to see what happens
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Thank you so much for the advice.I'll try my best next time.In fact, I even added two new stories.Also, I added the source for the cover image