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Sparrow9642


I'm a proud brony who reads stuff for a living. I also write darkfics & family-friendly stuff every-so-often. All I can say is, if you plan to read any of my content, happy horrors ;)

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PresentPerfect
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okay, but why is their old high school principal going to judge, forgive or even witness any of this? <.<

Hmmm, pretty interesting story.I had my suspicions about the said"Gamemaster", that proved out to be true.It was easy, I totally expected that.However, I did not expected the explanation.It is nice that the story was also plot driven and not just "gratuitous gore", even though the explanation was kinda forced and dramatic(but I understand that without it there would be no story lol).
One downside, if I may add, is the fact that it is never explained WHY Button Mash is violent.I think the story would've been more impactful if, let's say, his reason for being violent was alcohol, or a more emotional one(miscarriage, the death of his mom, etc).
Nonetheless, I pretty much enjoyed the story

The story is fine and all, but what does this have to do with MLP? Change the names of two characters and there's pretty much nothing else related between the two.

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