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Thanks!
Before I read this, can you describe what the "sex" tag is referring to?
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Just a sex joke at the beginning nothing clop related just wanted to make sure I got everything just in case you wanna know, it will also feature: a child drinking alcohol in chapter two so just a fair warning
Wait what, so she is aware that she has guns and she intended to kill Diamond in that moment…oookaaay
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Not quite. If you read back in the story, she noticed I’m the bathroom scene that she had two side doors she couldn’t open. She suspected that they had something to do with the self defense system but wasn’t sure what was inside. Had she known, I don’t think she would have used them
Why is this named defense? You would think a Defense mode would have like a Taser or so at best… this is a straight up Combat Mode!
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I mean, if you think about it, it was self defense... :)
Oh man
Hey sweetie dont worry i know my ways with ai!
I got one named IDA
So dont worry i know what "robots" or should i say the CORRECT term Artifical Intelligence are
One; The f***, Scootaloo!
And Two; IF Sweetie Bot keeps getting betrayed like this. She will turn into Skynet or Ultron on everypony.
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fr
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For real?
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yes
What the fuck Scootaloo!?
I hope we see why scootatoo became that unhinged and hateful.
Maybe something happened to rainbow dash which she blames sweetie bot for.
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She gave a very brief explanation to Sweetie Bot in this chapter. She claims that Sweetie Bot's absence destroyed the cutie mark crusaders and that they were never the same without her. I do plan on going into detail on that backstory later.
Ah yes I already know what the next 2 chapters are going to be called!
Ok but jokes aside this Is fun, but yeah scootaloo basically got the biggest character assasination in History here!
If you can ignore that this is fun
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If your guesses were "Chapter 13: Calibrating sensors precisely" and "Chapter 14: Chances of surrender unlikely" Then you'd actually be wrong. Despite how well those titles would actually fit with what I have planned for the story.
If by character assassination you mean she's incredibly off from how her character would act in the show then you're completely right. I was going for kind of an unhinged kind of thing for her.
But other than that, I'm excited for the next chapter to release! I've already typed a good amount :)
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those two actually WERENT what I was thinking off !!
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Oh what are you thinking?
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I think there are only 2 other lines that COULD fit
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Diagnosis software corruption and let's see if the hardware will function?
Multiple inbound hostiles detected is my guess
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that's a good one but no.
A couple things:
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yes those were my original guesses but also I listened to all Destabilized songs again and I noticed : L_st-_N-D_ta also has A LOT of lines you could use that probably would fit Very well for the next chapters!
So at first I was like : yeah duh it gonna be diagnosis ...but then I was like: maybe its going to be something Original..and now that I listened to The entire Destabilized series again, I think you may use lines from L_st-_N-D_ta....but hey, lets wait for the actual Chapter to come out and see what it will be!
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In either chapter 1 or chapter 2, Rarity said that she had waterproofed Sweetie Bot when she was younger. A small bit of her on her underbelly that hadn't been waterproofed as well had worn off and caused her to short circuit.
I like italicized better. I find it more fun!
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I actually use a couple lines from lost in data in the chapter "Reunition" When sweetie says things like "Your eyes used to glow" and in "Run: "Run" To run I'm a runaway," She alludes to Scootaloo not having "The guts to fire away."
In my opinion, that song was more of an interaction so I used more of those lines in dialogue rather than In chapter names. But We shall see hmmm? :)
I wouldn't miss this nasty version of Scootaloo, some "real friend" she is!
She had it coming.
Uh-oh.
Twilight would still be a horrified by the mass killing of the other ponies anyways, but whatever. You have no choice, and it was self-defense to keep yourself "alive".
Kill, or be Killed... That's what I like to see.
Goodbye Apple Bloom , was nice to know you!
Well that Title also works!
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Don't worry! I'm not a sadist! That last line might not mean what this comments section seems to think
Uuhh Nice epilouge… the ending was a bit too fast but overall this was an enjoyable little Story!
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What do you mean by fast?
Also, glad you enjoyed it :) I might or might not make a sequel.
Per the episode Point of No Return all months have 28 days. 13x28 = 364. If you assume a noncalery day (say Hearh's Warming or the Summer Sun Celebration) a year is 365 days. As there is no logical reason for Leap Year, the EQ year is shorter than the Earth year. Sweetie would be 11 years, 7 months.
ALL names should be capitalized. This includes Cutie Mark Crusaders & Sugarcube Corners.
Sweetie, you were upset but not letting Rarity camouflage you is going to be a BIG mistake.
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Idk how far you've gotten in the story but you have NO idea
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Only got as far chapter 2 at the time. I've since finished it. Yeah, a bit obsoleted by the rest of the story.
I'd recommend getting a FREE proofreader from
The Proofreader Group
It will slow you down, at most, 1-2 days on posting new chapters.
If you're doing this on a laptop, you can do the rough draft on G Docs. Let them have Editing Level access. This will ensure they can make suggestions & leave side notes about "why?" but will not make changes until you've seen and approved them.
ok one thing anyone with half a mind will know is that this makes no sense, sweetie has guns why would she need scots knife
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Lol! For real!
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Well that's the point. Scootaloo's statement was obviously a lie but the ponies of ponyville were so scared that they would be willing to believe anything. they are also super blind to Scootaloo's deceit
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even twilight the most smartest pony in ponyville was notable to see through the lie but rainbow was
I loved the story, I can't wait for the sequel!
Also why is there a sex tag? Either that's there for no reason or I missed something.
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A few sex jokes throughout the whole story. In my experience, you can never be too careful when tagging your stories. I'm glad you liked it! I have about half of the sequel written out i my head. It's just a matter of getting it on the website.
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Oh, I can't wait for the sequel, there's not a lot of sweetie bot stories to read as I read all of the sweetie bot stories that are already 100% completed, the others are either cancelled or incomplete from years ago.
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fr! You can never find a good SB story nowadays