After being constantly left alone because of her husband's work, Derpy often has to play the role of a single mother. We get to see how Derpy's life unfolds as a mother of two kids and the wife of a Time Lord.
(Takes place after the events of season 5)
cover art: https://www.deviantart.com/dinkyuniverse/art/Loving-Mother-Derpy-Hooves-878975443
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Is a mature rating really necessary for this story? The description doesn't sound like the things implied by the warning tags could be so bad that they warrant that rating.
Also, you should properly tag the artist of this picture in the source:
https://www.deviantart.com/dinkyuniverse/art/Loving-Mother-Derpy-Hooves-878975443
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right sorry. I always go with the m rating at first because I'm probably gonna add language throughout the story that would warrant an M rating. If at the end it turns out I didn't need the M rating, I will drop it to the appropriate rating :) Hope you liked the story though :)
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Also I love your profile picture. I could get behind that ship :)
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Keep in mind that a lot less readers will see the story if you have it M-Rated, because many users of the site have turned on the mature filter. It's also not a site rule that stories containing swears or foul language have to be mature-rated. The only rule related to profanity refers to the title and the description of the story, but not the story itself:
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For a story with profanity, a teen rating is enough to be in accordance with the site rules. And the teen rating saves you from unnecessarily losing views. If you keep the story M-Rated until the last chapter is published and only then switch it to teen, the views you lost will not come back, because the story does not appear on the front page anymore, then.
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Thanks, it's not a shipping picture, though. I don't know what the artist intended the picture to be, but personally, I am using this picture as a symbol of me and my friend. So the cheek kiss and hug Dinky gives Scootaloo here are purely platonic. These are signs of gratitude for something Scootaloo helped Dinky with.
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I shall take your advice! This shall be my first ever T rated story.
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A wise decision. Now your story can unfold its full potential.
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Hang on a second! I just realized you're the one who wrote "Aunt Millie" I loved that story so much! I'm so happy you decided to read mine :) *Squeee*
interesting, i always like a good story with Dinky
interesting, i winder what for lyra wuld beed an x ray spell. and something i noticed
they are ponies, right? so it should be hoof, or was this meant to be anthro/human? just confused.
Anyway, i am eager to see where this goes
Time Turner a bitch fr
Time Turner fucked up for that for real. I love Roseluck but I have a feeling ill hate her in this story.
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Oh! Nice catch! I'll fix that right away. Thx :)
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Youre welcome, just trying to help/be friendly.
Eager to see how it goes
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Rose is gonna get spicy in the next chapter
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Right. I admit, your Story gave me a thought
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What's that?
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During time Turner's absence, if derpy could meet another stallion or an old friend that helps her stay afloat. Depends really on what you got planned
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Oh trust me, I have extremely dramatic plans! The new chapter should be out in no more than ten minutes at the max ;)
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Okay, just thought could help you out/would be a nice touch for Derby to have help and/or someone close to her
Oh dear...dont take this the wrong way but I don’t wanna imagine what derpy would do to the father
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Oh she'll be pissed. Trust me :)
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I assume you got worked out who the father is? And i guess in the hospital, redheart would fit
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Just thinking out loud
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Don't worry. I got my plans. Don't wanna spoil the story before it even comes out though :)
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I'll give you this, the next chapter is called "Chapter 4: You're in Big Trouble."
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Sure. Old habit of trying to help
oh dear, i really hope Dinky makes it! I take you got a doctor in mind already?
ANd...please don't take this the wrong way, but Sparkler pregnant...kinda gave me a stupid thought that just popped in.
Also, interesting how advanched Dinkly acts for her age of just 4, i had expected her older, like 7 or so
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I actually haven't decided if Dinky will make it or not yet. My brain works like a computer and has fully planned out a storyline that branches here. One story line if Dinky makes it and another if she doesn't. I'm having trouble deciding which one's more interesting. As for Sparkler getting pregnant, I thought this is a good opportunity for her and her mom to grow closer than just Sparkler being "The good child" And making Derpy's life easier. Who knows? Maybe she'll even have the opportunity to grow closer with Time Turner who, as stated in chapter 3, was out working for a lot of her child hood. Idk why I shared so much of my thought process but I hope you don't mind. Also, on your third point, that's why Derpy has been commenting that Dinky is really smart for her age. She's developed really good speech and has a halfway analytical mind.
Also, don't worry you will get an explanation on what started the whole Dinky situation
Hope that cleared everything up :)
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as she is my favorite foal, i hope she does. If she needs a experenced doctor, know someone. pardon, old habit.
And the thought, lets just say i got a friend's OC who likes sparkler and popped in he is the father...
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Hmmm, c'est tres interessant!
I already have a custom character I designed for this story but if I didn't I totally would've considered your friend's OC sorry:l
Anywho, I decided on which storyline I'm choosing. Next chapter soon!
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Ah, might have been too tricky anyway about the doctor.
And my friend's oc would not have worked in terms of personality.
Okay then, i really pray for dinky then
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No more spoilers! Gotta write;)
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Sure and the OCs, just being clear
a stone falls of my heart to see Dinky survived! almost would have offered you my doctor OC to save her.
Although...I assu,me she needs to stay oin the hospital for a longt time?
And Derpy smoking, thats new, i kinda expected her to be a good example for her kids.
PLus, something i noticed
Also, if its okay here, happy halloween/nightmare night!"
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Thanks! It was like past midnight when I was writing this. I chose Sparkler to save her because I wanna have some fun story with that "Strange Spell
" She used to save her sister by somehow finding the exact perfect path of the glass. It's actually gonna dip into crossover territory there but with doctor whooves as a character, did you expect anything different?
Happy Nightmare NIght!
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naturally, that she and dinky might have gained some useful traits from him.
youre welcome
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and Dinky's stay, kinda popped in if she needs a roommate to pass the time while recvovernig
nice references! Dinkmy in a coma, i still wonder if she could need a roommate to pass the time after waking up
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Definitely something small I could implement for a scene or two. You;ve given me some good criticism and feedback so I'll bite :) Got any OCs?
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well, i got one OC, my personal could could fit in here as a colt. he's a bit unique but nothing tricky.
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alright! Let me have it! How about you send me a description in a DM so that others don't get spoiled by reading the comment ;)
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i thought you would never ask
interesting and refernce to aunt milie i seee
oh dear! hope dinky didn't miss her too much
Nicely done! Makes me eager for dinky's pov
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very soon!
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i really hope it isnt too much trouble for you
Youre welcome and this was nice
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Glad you liked it ;)