this fic was so GOOD and its not just because im helplessly gay. it, like all of your best work, feels so real and authentic. reading this, i could see its events playing out in hundreds of thousands of homes or hotels across the globe. the names and places may change but the feelings remain; these feelings of romance and respect and nervousness and so much MORE! its so delightful thick with sapphic tension i could simply die. as a romance fic And as an authentic representation of the way sex and bdsm and personal responsibility intersect, this fic excels

i can't get enough of your depiction of rarity!
also, your depiction of BDSM is perfectly raw and honest to the real experience, which is rarely seen in most fics. bravo to you!

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i try my best to portray the lifestyle accurately and i'm glad for comments like this for telling me that i do it well. BDSM is an important part of my identity.

There's something wonderfully real and emotional about this, both from Rarity's perspective and just in how the interactions play out between them. I definitely think, given that it's both about broaching sex and BDSM the first time between them, it's nice that you showed reluctance, a bit of over-eagerness, and of course an understanding and establishment of boundaries and consent. Great stuff.

Wonderful! I like the blend of sweetness and romance and lewdness! Plus, I don't often end up stumbling on Fluttershy/Rarity, but I'm glad I'm starting to!

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Glad i could scratch the itch :P