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Ponies, Big and Small1,058 stories ·1,138 members

For some reason or another, Steelhoof is shrinking. Hopefully he can get some help before it gets worse.

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McProky

McProky #1 · Sep 15th, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

Very nice story. Shame it ended so early though.

reedman

reedman #2 · Sep 16th, 2021 · · ·

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Thank you!

VisualPony

VisualPony #3 · Sep 19th, 2021 · 1 · ·

OK? So I like the stories premise. The writing is nice and to the point... But I am sorry, I don't think the "comedy" tag is appropriate here, since the end has a pretty dark undertone. I really get the impression that you OC there is fearing for his life. If it had ended with them ridiculing him or telling him "Oh don't worry, the spell will wear off in an hour or two" , it would have solved that.... But him wondering if they'll ever return him to normal? I'm sorry but that would, at least in my opinion, fit more into the "dark" tag, cause yes it might have been a "prank" by the recruits... but it ended quite millicously on their part.