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TheRayH


Spanish, Brony since 2013 and with a creative story writer (mostly). Favorite pony: Twilight Sparkle; Favorite EG: Sunset Shimmer; Favorite G5 Pony: Izzy Moonbow

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Sunburst after having the responsability fo creating a new spell, travels to her mom's house for a weekend to calm down some stress due to his work, but he kept working on that spell and something went wrong... Sunburst transformed into a mare. After this, Sunburst asks Stellar Flare; now turned into a mare, to make one of her plans for Sunburst and she will try to make her triumph at Manehattan.

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Chapters (7)
Comments ( 11 )

11009694
As Stellar would be with plans "Already got one!". In other chapter that will be the center on that moment

triunf at Manehattan.

What? What is "triunf"?

An interesting story, I hope to see how it unfolds.

P.D. Any story that you recommend that someone change gender?

11009897
I think that the author meant "triumph".

11009954
Yup, spelling error. Already fixed

After this, Sunburst asks Stellar Flare; now turned into a mare,

I'm confused by this. Isn't Sunburst's mother already a mare?

11037131
It is a bit confusing to get the correct spelling, honestly i still have problems trying to write the precise pronouns for Sunburst in the story. I am sorry if it's very confusing at some points, it wasn't my intention; i just don't have any experience doing "Gender Benders" or Fanfics in general (besides being here for almost 1 year)

11037522
Why not try this?

Now turned into a mare, Sunburst asks her mother for help. Together, they will work to ensure Sunburst triumphs in Manehattan.

11616573
I kinda forget about this one... started writing other stories so i'm thinking on dropping this one

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