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Vivid Syntax

Convention Runner, Statistician, and lover of all things Soarburn


Sunburst visits Stellar Flare on Mother's Day. There sure are a lot of mares out and about and making eyes at Sunburst, but that's probably just a coincidence... right?

A quick one-shot for Mother's Day.

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This was a good read Syntax. always love awkward SunBurst clopping.


something tells me that Steller flare is the "i'm sorry, but not sorry enough." type of parent

Inside, Sunburst marveled at the literal rows upon rows of books, many of which he'd never seen before. He breathed deeply and relished the musty, dry air. It sent a tingle up his spine, and he trotted forward, looking around. "Wow! There's so much more than I remember. New encyclopedias, updated filing system, and I don't even know what a 'shipping' section is, but it sure looks deep! Did you have anything to do with this, Mom?"

You have no idea how deep Sunburst

OMG, yes. I can totally see this happening in the show. Well, minus all the sex jokes, obviously.

Stellar Flare watched silently from the shadows of the romance section.

That was pretty much the moment I knew I was going to upvote this. :rainbowlaugh:

Obviously this is way, waaay over the top. Sunburst's mom goes well past the point of being uncomfortable, and into the realm of promoting some Very Bad Things (TM). But there's also a madcap comic sensibility that remains funny throughout, and the ending moment where Sunburst talks about how unconfident he feels in his own skin is poignant.

The only remaining question is: what did she offer, tell, or promise everyone to make literally an entire town try to bed Sunburst all at the same time? :derpytongue2:

Good thing Spike never had to deal with this.

This fic is like a reversed Pepé Le Pew cartoon, and I love it!

Thanks, folks! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.:heart:


what did she offer, tell, or promise everyone to makeliterallyan entire town try to bed Sunburstall at the same time?

"Hello, my son is Sunburst." :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks for giving it a look!

"Need some relief from the heat?" #phrasing :pinkiehappy:

Everystalion is gay for Braeburn.

This was a wonderfully whimsical story that pretty much just made my day. Quick, snappy and hilarious with your usual witt and a mix of hemp seed. ^^

Who was it that was swearing at the end of the chapter?

It's a power he tries to use responsibly. :rainbowlaugh:

Glad you enjoyed it! Enjoy your free hemp seed. ^^

That was Fashion Plate. I'll try to make it clearer next time. :scootangel:

This was HILARIOUS :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Good job xd

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! :heart:

for a story set in sires hollow a shame we never saw any of the ponies FROM sires hollow. i expected steller flares first attempt to ship sunburst would be with ever essence (don't know if thats her name or just a fan conceived one) the essence selling pony

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