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Just falling through this tempest called life

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Immediately following the failed invasion of Canterlot by the changelings, one of Queen Chrysalis's inner circle of advisors is traveling through the Everfree Forest when it comes a simple conclusion: The Invasion of Canterlot was always doomed, and it must find a way to establish peaceful relations with Equestria. But will they listen, and so soon after the attack on the royal wedding?

Currently rated Teen for language, but may bump up to mature depending on whether or not I include some more graphic parts in the story.

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Excellent story keep up the good work.
And let me know if you need help with your next story

Interesting start, but I'm a bit puzzled by the changeling's name. It translates roughly as 'Because Voice' as far as I understand Latin. Was that your intention?

10921370
His name was supposed to be "The voice of reason", like the title of the story. I blame google translate and my lack of understanding latin.

10921373
Vox Rationis. Or Ratio ('Reason') if the former is too cumbersome

10921379
I corrected that to better fit. Thank you.

10921389
No problem, happy to help :twilightsmile:

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