This story presents a what if scenario.
What would have happened if Thorax had sought out Princess Cadance and Shining Armor upon reaching the Crystal Empire, instead of hiding in the frozen wastelands to be found by Spike? Would the Crystal Ponies be willing to accept him, or is he getting in over his head? More importantly, what will the two rulers, the same whose wedding was almost ruined by his kind, decide to do with him?
Takes place before the episode The Times They Are A Changeling, and of course retcons what happens in said episode.
Chapters (2)
Yay for Thorax!
I'd like to read that epilogue you're thinking of writing. No pressure, though
Ooh! I like this idea, and an epilogue sounds cool!
I have to say, I’m interested in this concept, but shouldn’t there be an Alt. Universe Tag?
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Didn't realize I forgot to do that
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👍🏻
this was interesting and could become a full story
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There's potential, but I don't have any plans beyond the potential epilogue. Most of my time now has been spent on my other story. I'm actually close to publishing the next chapter for it.
No inhibitor ring?
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Nah, I think he's been forced to wear enough jewelry for now.
Pretty good.
Now we wait for the next chapter of Fitting in
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It's coming. Still got a good bit of writing to do on it.
I rather liked this story! I felt it was a great AU. I do kind of wish we saw the Mane Six's reactions to Thorax in this universe, as well as his relationship with Spike. But overall it is good!
I mean he's not wrong Discord is something else lol
Friendship
Well this one is a pretty interesting scenario of what ifs so instead of hiding inside of a cave he decided to go to the Crystal Empire knowing the crystal ponies will react very poorly and hostile against him he wanted to as for Cadence and Shining Armor to speak about his reasoning coming here without no disguise which they were pretty surprised why thorax knowing the risk we'll come here and asking for this kind of request about learning about friendship and not only that living with the ponies despite his kind did not have a good reputation of course Shining Armor did not like the idea but Cadence wanted to give him with the benefit of the doubt well hopefully for thorax hope that this will go very well and his decision to stay here
Aww that is a really nice way to see how he's been doing even though at first it was a rocky start and along the road yeah it's not that easy but he wanted to make this work it was hard for him but he somehow got some of the ponies here to trust him even though it was very slow and even the Mane 6 and Spike really got to know him more better even though rainbow is still kind of sketchy but she wants to make it work as well and it looks like thorax wants to write a letter to Princess Celestia to introduce himself to her and few days later he got a response from her and her kind word about him really given him hope that one day the changelings will come together and peace with the other ponies and creatures around Equestria this was a pretty good story keep up the good work
Thorax had to sit for a moment. He was allowed to stay, but he was also being kept on a leash. Was it worth it?
One thought back to the changeling hive was all it took. The thought of going back to that nest of vicious creatures that would sooner suck the love out of one that had any than try to make peace made for a good motivator.
"I accept the terms", he told them.
You are a brave man thorax
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When people catch your spelling mistakes
So sad I didn't see this chapter earlier! It was great though! Sweet Thorax the cinnabug
This sentence should be split in two and made into two paragraphs because two people are speaking.
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I agree with horses are fuckin weird! That doesn’t belong in a Rated E story! Why is it there?