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Dawn Leaper


Did you know that humans are approximately 70% water... so, we're basically just cucumbers with more anxiety <3

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This story is a sequel to His Other Half


'Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality.' - Emily Dickinson

Nobody ever told Soarin that grief felt so much like fear.

Some people leave our lives as quickly as they entered. Some people were with us right from the dawning of our existence. Some people leave footprints all over our heart, and change us for the better.

But some people insinuate themselves into the very centre of our hearts, become our whole life, alter the very nature of our souls, and we are never, ever the same again.

They had been together for so long, the prospect of losing her had never really crossed his mind. He couldn't imagine a world without her, it was simply... unfathomable.

But he knew he couldn't stop it from happening.

And he hated that.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 51 )

I feel so sorry for soran hope he gets a happy ending

Oh my gosh. This managed to be so sweet, and sad, and all around amazing.
Got me right in the feels.
:)

I can't stop crying

you evil person. i will never forgive you for this.

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Don't worry he willll
I hate sad endings myself:)

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:raritydespair: omg thank you so much all your comments are so niceee

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forgive me and I will give you more soarindash fluff :fluttershysad:

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only ‘cause you’re such a good writer...

I don’t know if I love this for being so sweet and sentimental or if I hate it for breaking my heart into millions of pieces :raritycry: But girl this was so good I can’t wait for more :heart:

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Aww thanks that means the world x

Only because it was so beautifully written, was it able to hurt so much.
I will wait (in tears) for the rest.

i regret reading this in public because im trying so hard not to cry :fluttershysad:

i don't think ive even cried this much over a fanfiction. i shut my phone and just cried for a good 5 minutes. you are a brilliant storyteller and captured everyones emotions perfectly. now if you will excuse me im going to go cry more:fluttershysad:

Dammit, I'm at work and I'm reading this. It wasn't a good decision 😭 Poor Soarin. I loved your fic and the best Fics of this ship without a doubt

:applecry:
:fluttercry:
:pinkiesad2:
:ajsleepy:
:twilightsmile:
:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:
Star light, star bright, brightest star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might,
Have the wish I make tonight
😭😭
Beautifully written ❤️❤️

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Swing you low or high away,
Burn you hot or dim,
My only wish I dare not say-
Lest you should grant me him.
:fluttercry::heart:

You know what I'm adding that to the chapter :raritydespair: thank you for the inspiration

I thought it would end here, I want to see the next chapter. I love how you write to Soarin. Her feelings seem real and the love she feels for Dash. It makes me very sad that Poor Wonderbolt is like this.

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Thank you for your kind words :fluttershysad::heart: I think I may have underestimated how many chapters it's gonna take me to finish this story, I think ill probably have another 2 out and then it'll be done x

Tears.
Tears are all I could see while readinggg!
Awesome job as always, your writing is so powerful!
:)

“I laughed, I cried, it moved me, Bob.”
:heart: :heart: :heart:
Thank you for such a sweet sweet vision.
🌒🌓🌕🌗🌘

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Silver!!!

It was so sweet! Also I almost cried just at the mention of the fact that it was Silver who greeted her.
My heart!
:heart:

Something tells me that the next chapter, It will be time to say goodbye to Soarin.

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Silver always has to have a word in :rainbowlaugh:

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Ooohohoh we will have to wait and see hmmm :raritywink:

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That’s what made me stop crying.
I laughed so hard :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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I know! The wise-ass makes everything better.

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Silver never fails to put a smile on my face :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you thank you thank you :rainbowkiss:
This whole story was freaking amazeballs :heart:

All the Soarin’s :rainbowlaugh:

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No, thank you for leaving such amazing comments :twilightsmile:

And yes, there does seem to be quite a lot of Soarins hehe :moustache:

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! i love them so so much and the way you describe their adoration for one another in this story and His Other Halfis amazing! love this, the site is blessed to have a writer like u :pinkiehappy:

so amazing amazing in every single way :pinkiesad2: this is my new favorite soarindash story

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Thank you I try my best :heart: very honoured to be a favourite story :twilightblush:

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Ahaa I hope they're happy tears :raritydespair::twilightsmile: And thanks so much for the follow!! :)

How heartbreaking! I literally cried throughout the entire story! :fluttercry: :raritydespair:

bestie that was a beautiful ending and im sobbing my eyes out rn :')

The best fanfic I've read besides Piercing the Heavens

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