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Crystalline Waters


Hi there! I love all things Wonderbolts and Soarindash related. Fleetfoot is my favorite Wonderbolt, Luna is my favorite princess, and Lightning Dust is my favorite antagonist. That's all for now! :)

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Rainbow Dash is new to the Wonderbolts but isn't a stranger when it comes to relationships, even if they've ended poorly. Soarin Skies has been a Wonderbolt for some time now but is pretty inexperienced when it comes to mares. Follow them as they set out on a journey to find what they've always hoped for, as well as try to help each other through whatever challenges may come their way.
Inspired by: Fleetfire by Melody Song

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 104 )

This story is off to a great start, I love it already! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

10840424
Oh my gosh thank you so much! :)

Hi! I came from your comment on His Other Half (which was really sweet btw) and found this gem of a story! So cute and has so much potential :twilightsmile: ps does anyone here know how to comment on the FAQ page? Thanks x

10840940
Aww thank you so much! That means a lot! Also, I found the FAQ page, but I don’t know how to comment on it. I’m sorry, I wish I could be more helpful.

10841010
Aha no worries! Thanks for trying :raritywink:

This is getting better and really good my friend. :raritystarry: loving it and can't wait to see how Spitfire and Fleetfoot will ask of Rainbow Dash, I have a feeling Fleet is going for the teasing soon.:ajsmug: let's see how booth Soarin and Dash will do next (booth of them being very funny and afraid of rejection thoughts):twilightsmile:

And hay good luck on your next chapter my friend, we'll be waiting and reading soon.:rainbowdetermined2:

10843647
Hi and thank you so much! The next chapter will be kind of sad though at some parts but yes, we'll have some funny friend moments! ;)

Comment posted by V-H-SClop deleted June 5th

Awww, poor Dashie. It's sweet that Soarin was able to help her though. Great job on this chapter, the emotions all felt very real, and the ending was wonderful!

10847675
I’m sorry but that’s not what I hoped to convey at all. The point is that he is there to help her get better, not tear her down.

10847958
Awe thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed. :)

10847969
No problem, it was a really sweet chapter!

Googles translator sucks this is what I meant:

Great Chapter, I want to see how Soarin gains Dash's trust little by little

Better?

10848195
Oh that makes much more sense! I was worried that I had unintentionally conveyed a much darker topic than what was meant.
But thank you! :)

yayy new chapter!! omg the tea darling... :pinkiegasp:i want to punch rainbow blitz in his smug little face :twilightangry2: anyway great chapter, i love to see the character progression and the reasons behind why dash is so defensive!

10848400
Thank you! And I couldn’t agree more with wanting to punch the smirk off of his face. Anyone like that is enough to put someone on the defensive. I still kinda hate myself for making him such a douche.

Pls update soon😇😍

10855586
I will. I should have a new chapter coming out tonight or tomorrow night!
:)

Rainbow Dash is new to the Wonderbolts but isn't a stranger when it comes to relationships, even if they've ended poorly.

Really? In what episode was Rainbow in a romantic relationship with someone?

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It isn’t cannon to the show. It’s just a backstory that I made up for her. I don’t know why but I saw it fitting and decided to write it.

Awwww, that's adorable! Dashie the kitten cuddler! Squee! :rainbowkiss:

10857652
Thank you! I know we don't see a snuggly Dash really, but I really love the idea of her being cuddly.
:)

10857661
Heh, I love it too, she's just so tiny and cuddle-able!

you’re doing really great on this story, and i can tell you’re into writing it which is really nice to see. i love Dash’s kitten yawns... seriously cute

10857786
Thank you so much! We do stan kitten Rainbow.
:)

ahh c'est trop mignon :)

Sorry the French side of me comes out when I'm excitedddddddd :pinkiehappy:

10859301
Merci bien! I'm glad you're excited.
:)

Awww, adorable Soarindash bit at the end, and the weather control headcanon makes a lot of sense, plus it's nice to see Thunder and Dashie stepping into leadership roles of their own on the team. Keep up the great work!

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Thank you! I was worried that it wouldn't make sense or wouldn't suit them. And yeah I think that Rainbow and Thunder have proved to want to set good examples for those who look up to them.
:)

Nice chapter! I really loved the descriptions about the weather, you know I'm a sucker for imagery... Great job :)

Keep up the good work!

10866865
Yes they have, and this was a perfect way to show it, great job!

really good chapter :)
you did great on the whole weather description thing and i liked how Dash and Thunderlane got a chance to take charge.
super cute as well

10869676
Thank you! I didn’t really know what I was doing at first but it got easier as it went on.
:)

this was too cute and romantic. well done !
:rainbowkiss:

Awww! So sweet and romantic! Soarin's such a big cute sap

10877415
Indeed he is with his eyes full of stars!:rainbowlaugh:

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