• Published 20th May 2021
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Spy Work in Ponyville - TheForgottenOnes



Its been 6 weeks since a mysterious creature of the Everfree wandered into town, and now it has everypony wrapped around its claw... according to Rainbow Dash. Determined to expose it, how will the pegasus fair face to face with said monster?

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Comments ( 43 )

Your writing some tasty stuff, I'm down for more of your horse words :pinkiehappy:

Amen to that. This story is so good need more! Keep up the epic horse words.

Yes sequel

Poor sex starved pennsylvania

This is quite the funny romp, I wouldn't mind seeing Twilight approaching Red for ... a turn with 'the creature'. :P

Now I just have to see if anyone wants a sequel...

YES!

Yes sequel Book pony needs some loving too.

For what it's worth I would say a sequel is in order.

For extra comedy focus on the word "procreate" and the hijinks for 3 mares having a foal-daddy who cant speak their language.

Thanks for the shout out. I'm glad to have been a help.

A sequel would be well recieved. Eveyone's favorite book horse needs some lovin too afterall.

There needs to be a follow-up. Twilight needs some lovin' too.

Oh, come on! Don't leave Purple Smart hanging! Give her the sequel! Do it for her! And for her lab glassware! :twilightblush:

Do we want a sequel? Well, hell yeah I want a sequel!

Just a few suggestions from an unqualified:
Anon needs to apologize to Feather eventually, but the language barrier is too tough for that to work the best at the moment. Maybe at least another lay with Twi before some drama of finding the Crystal ball, learning a bit more language, learning just how strongly Feather likes him and developing a bit more of a relationship with Feather, and apology.

All done with this one. Now I just have to see if anyone wants a sequel...

If we want a sequel?:trixieshiftright:
what do you guys say? do you want the sequel?! :twistnerd:
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YOU DAMN RIGHT WE WANT A SEQUEL!!!!

Twilight needs to get laid, human should learn to speak/understand some horse and I'm interested in see if this threesome has room for one more!:twilightblush::trollestia:

Blinking my eyes as I woke up, I sat myself up as my mind began to boot up. After realizing I existed, I sluggishly turned my head to the right.

Skipping the mug altogether, I held the pot of coffee in my magical grasp and downed the remaining content before walking to my unmade bed and slumping onto the mattress.

How is this so relatable?

Definitely need a sequel. More horse words!

We absolutely want a sequel. This was hot, adorable and hilarious. The power of scritches seem to be too much for the poor little colored horses to resist, as is his stamina :moustache:

Purple also needs to get laid, something that our dear hooman should be quite able to rectify :trollestia:

Can barely wait to see what shenanigans shall ensue, you've earned this favorite and follow :twilightsmile:

More horse words about our dude

Nice. Definitely a sequel must be made. I hope poor Everett will learn to speak to the ponies - even with all the sexy time, it must still be lonely not to mention boring.

Oh good lord, I was flinching at the use of glassware before, but an erlenmeyer flask? That's... *shudder* no. I've seen lab equipment snap or shatter enough times to not want anyone to roll those dice.

Good like a #2 pencil you did your research #ShineGang 👍:pinkiegasp:

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What he said👆👆👆

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Me too buddy, me too

DF

Sequel is yes very. :pinkiecrazy:

This was a great read, and I would very much like a sequel.

It is a dangerous concoction of sugar, caffeine, and some blue stuff from the Crystal Empire

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Huh. So it is true, the Crystal Empire really is made of drugs.:rainbowwild:

Would love to see what he would do to one of the bigger ponies like
Celestia, Luna, Cadance, or Chrysalis

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I've been here for a looooooooong time.

Monk
“To say that Twilight Sparkle went bugfuck would be like saying the Incredible Hulk had some mild anger management issues.” -DustTraveller

Yes, they need to venture into the Everfree where Twilight fails to keep herself together, whereupon they end up cuddling! She can't escape the snuggles this time!

You need to get laid indeed PurpleSmart.

Oh hey! I know the perfect guy to do it too!
*cough* the human *cough*

Perhaps something exploring Feather Pen and her hairless heart's romance?

This was a really nice story and i do hope you one day drop a sequel, though judging by how far back this was i wont get my hopes up too much :fluttershysad:

Is there going to be a continuation of this story?

Hello there can I/we get a update on the story plzzzzz I/we want MOREEEEE!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

Sweet bugger on the devil's balls....
You Americans keep tabs on the sex life of your college students???

Дайте пожалуйста продолжения этой истории?!

Daum this story was so good...I'd love to see it continue

This should have a sequel

Absolutely a sequel bruh, this chit is hot and funny, a rare combo nowadays. And looks like I'm not the only one who's in that line 👌

Please tell me there is more.

Dam Texas is top three I was hoping we wouldn’t be that high on the list.

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