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PeonyPopstar
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Italics are for internal monologue, when a character is literally speaking in their mind. Not for everything that isn't audible dialogue.
10796598
Several professional authors use italics for whispers or when a character mutters under their breath. There is nothing wrong with using italics for inaudible dialogue.
10796635
If you'd read the story you'd have noticed that they used it for EVERYTHING that wasn't dialogue. That's my point.
10796638
How did you proofread this and not notice?
10796598
This is my first fic, I'm still learning. I was going to stop italicizing everything for my next fic.
10796652
That's fine. Pointing out a problem was not meant to be an attack.
10796651
He did notice but it was already too far along in the editing process to go back and un-italicize everything, who knows maybe one day ill go back and fix it.
10796668
Was going to say a comment saying basically the same thing but you beat me to it.
I tend to check the comments first for spoilers on new stories as a way to avoid some of the really bad ones and the way your first statement was written allowed it to be misinterpreted. Thank you for clarifying.
10796668
I assume this was made with some word processor. Just CTRL-A to select all text, and CTRL-I to set it all italic, then once more to make none of it italic. I doubt there's more than a line or two that should actually be italicized.
10797054
The issue has been rectified, is it up to your liking now? :)
10797134
My eyes no longer bleed looking at it, thanks.
Can you make more facesitting in your fics
10797151
Me and him plan on it. Lots of it.
10797157
Nice, can't wait for it.
10797151
Will make a note of that!
10797348
Thanks
Good stuff!
Well this was a fun read glade to see there will be more to come of this, good luck
10797501
Thank you!
10798042
Much appreciated! Believe me there is a lot more to come!
Excellent 1st story keep up the good work and I give this story a 10 out of 14 .
I will rank it hiyer ones you have ritan more
10815357
Haha, thanks! I hope you'll be pleased when the next one comes out!
Are you going to continue this? I would very much like to see just how deep Rarity's 'dates' with Gemini get.
11118446
It's in the works! I'm hoping to release chapter two at some point this year.
Believe me, we're barely scratching the surface
11118526
Ohh, I'll be waiting...with interest...
I've been waiting so long that I think I've lost count!
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The next part will come eventually! Things have been a bit... Turbulent... To say the least, but we're working on it!
When will the sequel finally come out?! Dear author, I don't know what to say! Your attitude towards readers is simply unacceptable! Such a long wait makes my heart burst out of my chest!
If I had such an opportunity, I would like to support you both from the motivated and financial side. But to my deepest regret, this is not possible. So I can only wish you good luck in your work.