Good to see you back

Excellent job. Loved how the girls were in competition for Spike, especially Spike knocking Rarity down plenty of pegs for her insubordination

Wait what hit sunset a kick fist or the machete blade if the blade shouldn't she be in a bad way needing medical attention

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If he hit her with the machete i would've said "stabbed" he was only able to punch her

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Ah Oki though stabbed is more lethal I was thinking more the blade slashes her side wait are the teams even wearing body armour?

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Yes, but it's not like knight armor, is almost like bullet proof vests

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Ah makes sense then though punching body armour wouldn’t have winded her

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If you are a normal human, but remember that these guys also have magic and skills...

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Ah so it’s a enhanced punch to the gut makes sense

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Check description

Loved it, you write very well.

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Just did

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Wait fight description of the it’s now a collab thing in main description?

Why do I feel that Rarity made a collar that she'll wear for the rest of her life that says "Property of Spike"?

Good so far, i hope to see more!

I like it I hope you continue making it

No I caught up! This is so good, please update. A vacation arc would be amazing.

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Master peace. Please update I'm begging you. 🙏🙏🙏🙏

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Soon, just finishing the Arc timeline for this

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Thank you I have been waiting for an updated for ever