Ok now this is amazing you have good talent in writing a story with spike you actually motivated me to return to my writes you legit are an amazing writer and i hope this story continues
“DUDE!!! WHAT DID YOU DO?” said one of the lackeys as they went over to the edge to see Spike free fall
1) Even Garble's lackeys think he went too far.
2) Spike seems to have been born at the shallow end of the magic gene pool, in a society that treats the weak as expendables, no less. Troubleshoes wasn't this unlucky in Canon!
3) It honestly worries me how jaded Spike is with his position, to the point that he simply stands there, takes whatever beating comes for him, refuses to let his friends stand up for him because he thinks he's not worth their time and effort, before rinsing and repeating. Is he really that broken to not care that there are at least some people in his life who don't treat him like trash?
Above points aside, I say keep writing this story. I'd like to see how this turns out in future chapters.
Definitely interesting, can't wait to see where this goes!
Good story
You actually inspired me to write something similar. Good story my bro, i can't wait to see where this goes.
Nice beginning would like to see more from this
Is the plot set in stone or is it open to the readers on good or evil choices
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It's open, I need as many ideas as I can get
Pretty good, liking the mystery so far
I'm definitely going to follow this.
Ok now this is amazing you have good talent in writing a story with spike you actually motivated me to return to my writes you legit are an amazing writer and i hope this story continues
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Thank you so much
Great story definitely a follow. I can't wait for the next chapter.
you should add facesitting
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Then one vote he sucker punches garble though a wall
I like this story and how it's progressing so far. Consider me a fan and your story in my favorites.
1) Even Garble's lackeys think he went too far.
2) Spike seems to have been born at the shallow end of the magic gene pool, in a society that treats the weak as expendables, no less. Troubleshoes wasn't this unlucky in Canon!
3) It honestly worries me how jaded Spike is with his position, to the point that he simply stands there, takes whatever beating comes for him, refuses to let his friends stand up for him because he thinks he's not worth their time and effort, before rinsing and repeating. Is he really that broken to not care that there are at least some people in his life who don't treat him like trash?
Above points aside, I say keep writing this story. I'd like to see how this turns out in future chapters.
I must know where this goes!! It is very, very interesting....Please continue writing this, simply divine story.
I like this already keep it up 👍🏾
it realy good keep up the good woke
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Spike as Ms. X
Music unavailable on both.
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Music [Cold - Beautiful Life] [Cold - We all love]
race
What is the song that's playing
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Music [Cold - Beautiful Life] [Cold - We all love]