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Nonya Beezewax


(She/Her) A loser with too much free time

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Interesting.... Can't wait to see more. :pinkiehappy:

One thing I don't understand though:why didn't Twilight use some sort of spell on Pinkie, like immobilization or something?I realize that this chapter would not make sense, but knowing Twi's magical prowess, the way she acted doesn't make any sense either.
Wouldn't it be more nice if you wrote that Pinkie used some sort of magic nullifier ring on Twi or a more plausible way of blackmail?

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Simply put, Twilight couldn't. Even if she killed Pinkie, Starlight would die too. Keep in mind, Starlight is in a location unknown to anyone but Pinkie. She has to keep working with Pinkie if she wants Starlight to live. Starlight needs Pinkie to supply food and water. Without Pinkie, she'll die before anyone can find her. And if Twilight were to disobey Pinkie, Starlight wouldn't be fed nor would she get any water. In other words, Twilight's screwed.

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But couldn't she immobilize Pinkie with a spell and make her confess?We saw in the show that Twilight is capable of that sort of spells.Or at least make her try to do that and then Pinkie would blackmail her with what you said

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Again, she can't due to Starlight. She could turn Pinkie in (immobilize her and drag her to the Royal Guard), but it'd be impossible to find Starlight before it was too late. Pinkie isn't going to give up the location of where Starlight is (think of it as though she made a "Pinkie Promise" to herself). No amount of force can get her to reveal where Starlight is, hence Twilight would have to search for her. If that happened, Starlight would die of dehydration or starvation before she could find her.

That being said, I suppose I should make it a little more clear that she can't stop Pinkie if she wants Starlight to live. I'll have to work on other ways of making that more obvious.:twilightblush:

(PS: I do appreciate the feedback btw. If there are other issues, or you have an idea on how to improve this story, please tell me!)

It’s been a year since the last chapter you alright?

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Thanks for the concern! Currently, I am working on another project, hence why this story hasn't been updated. If I'm being entirely honest, I'm not as excited about this story rn. It's not canceled, but I have put it on a hiatus. Hope that clears things up!:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Monke man deleted Mar 12th, 2022
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