• Member Since 10th Oct, 2018
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Nonya Beezewax


(She/Her) A loser with too much free time

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Definitely will follow with this

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

Wow. I expected Fluttershy to have killed herself, not... this. I am shocked.

Normally I don't follow this kind of stories, but this one is good!

Damn, this is intriguing. Even just the concept of Fluttershy having these sorts of problems never bothered to cross my mind. Keep it up!

Story pic reminds me of coralline

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Funny enough I haven't actually watched that movie. I have seen screenshots and I did watch one clip of it, but I don't exactly know what it's about. Definitely see the vibes, though.

Heyo! Here's part one, premiering tonight! https://youtu.be/rZ1SjvHJ89Y

That's..some extreme self defense?

Ah, I like how blatant Rainbow's dementia is. Sure, at first its "ooooo fluttershy is trapped in a doll oooo" but it gets so wonderfully dreamlike and obviously untrue.

Discord is not handling her death well, but he's not gone mad.

The way he copes with the doll was way less unhealthy then his seclusion and lack of self-care.

Bruh that escalated quickly

Wait, so it's all in rainbows head it did Discord actually drive her crazy?

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Sort of, yeah. Wasn't Discord's intention; just happened to trigger something in her head.:pinkiesmile:

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So she didn't really see discord abuse Fluttershy's spirit trapped in a doll, it was just a crazy dream? It's just her mind snapped because of the sight of the doll?

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So the CMC didn't really eat Fluttershy's corpse or get paid by Discord to kill her so that he'd trap her in a doll to abuse her? I'm confused.

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I thought it was schizophrenia. Especially since she's starting to see things that aren't there like Fluttershy.

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Yeah, that stuff in her dream was due to paranoia (it made her dream up those outlandish scenarios), and the stuff when she was awake was hallucinations. I tried to write it to make it obvious that it was paranoid schizophrenia, though I definitely could've made it more obvious in hindsight.

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Thanks for clarifying. Also I feel so bad for Discord. At least he has a way to cope with the loss that isn't too unhealthy. I hope there will be a sequel where Discord finally moves on and uses the doll to honor his wife's memory. It'd be a bittersweet ending.

What the fuck is wrong with the CMC? That ain't no self defense Dawg.

So did discord become abusive which cause fluttershy to go crazy and so she ran away so discord got the CMC to murder her? What.

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