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I realise the first chapter is shorter than the first chapter of the first Slendermane, but don't worry, I will compensate for this with longer chapters soon. This Story will surpass the word length of the first story. I appologise for the arrival of the mature rating, but unlike the first story, this one will be much more explicit and present with gore as the story gets more intense. Never-the-less I hope all my readers of the first Slendermane will enjoy what I put forward in this sequal, for without you wonderful readers, I would have no motivation to write this.

Oh and By the way, Scootaloo, will appear throughout the story, but she will not be entering the forest. People who read the first story will understand why.

how often can we hope for updates?

Why does it say adault content. The last one wasn't line that.

Man I was worried for Scootaloo for a while. Good thing Rainbow Dash got her to the hospital in ten seconds flat:scootangel:

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Well, because I'm nearing the end of a school term exams and assignments are dropping in amount, so I will be writing more frequently. I'd say once every two days, three days tops.
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Yes the first one was pretty light for its content, but I'm going to be entering more depth with gore, and it will be more frequent in amount as the story progresses, so I had to bump it up a level.
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Ooh yeah, I'm sure everyone was worried for Scootaloo, I like Scoot though, I didn't ever intend for her to die dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png :scootangel:

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i've been looking forward to this!

1198068 And now my friend, It has arrived. I hope you enjoy what happens to come in future. My main hopes are that this attracts more attention to the first story. Hopefully this one will get some more thumbs up too, 2 to 1 straight away isn't thart great a start.

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1198080 don't worry, it will have more

I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS!!!!

On another note, WHERE THE FUCK IS :trollestia:

1197718 yeah I can tell the first Slendermane didn't have such explicit descriptions of such wounds Fluttershy had. Now we see truly how twisted and stomach turning it really must have been. Which is good. It's important for a horror story to be presice for the reader to have a vivid image for what is happening.

1199072 Exactly what I'm trying to accomplish for my readers this time. I added the scar on Fluttershy's leg in the cover image, but it didn't turn out quit the way I wanted unfortunately.

1198990 Sipping tea in Canterlot probobly. don't forget the story only happened over the night, word wont reach Celestia about Twilight disapearing straight away dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

aw shit, i didn't know there was a sequel. will read

1201892 I tried making posting about it all over my other story, and stuff :derpytongue2: I'll have to think of a better way to make sure everyone is notified

Well due to an unfortunate incident involving word crashing on me at school, I shall require another day to rewrite a large portion of the chapter which was lost :flutterrage::twilightangry2:dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_hmph.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png Hopefully everyone doesn't mind an update tomorrow instead, dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png

It's about time I got this up! Sorry for overly late update, had a lot of trouble getting this chapter to work. hopefully I will have a much easier job next time.

Hope you dont confuse it with the rake. I hate it when that happens in a fic.:applejackunsure:

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rainbow gets taken first? I APROVE GREATLY!!!

1235011 I thought it needed a twist :twistnerd:

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1235525 i see that! i'm hoping rainbow dies...a fate worse than death itself

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1235525 i see that! i'm hoping rainbow dies...a fate worse than death itself

i love this story

Anyone who doesnt liek this story is an idiot

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1236342 so no one gets an opinoin? they have to like this or they are a moron?

1237509 its not that, its simply that there is a pretty high ratio of likes to dislikes, and i don't understand why. but in a way, yes, what you said, AS I AM THE NEW LEADER lol
EDIT: dislikes to like, my bad

1238233 Did you end up reading the first story?

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1237660 i know you want people to like it...just you shouldn't call people that don't like it a moron...that's all i'm saying

1239674 yes i did. i'm still trying to figure out if diamond tiara deserved that early death she got. also, who puts a perfectly good gore pit in the middle of the forest? Slendermane needs to work on his tastes in gore pit placement

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1240013 i know...i was only saying

1240076 I don't like Diamond Tiara... She's a brat. Also, from alot of perceptions, that gore pit may not have even existed, i wanted to make that last chapter seem very psychologically troubling for Twilight.

1240160 you did that well with the poem at the end, as you were very good at eshowing the fear and sadness that went through her in the end

1240174 Thank you, but I really don't think the poem was that great, it was just something I thought up in half an hour. But a lot of people told me similar things to that.
1240106 Might I ask why you are keen to see Rainbow die? :rainbowderp: Personally I'm more into the idea of Rarity getting taken out of the picture :raritydespair:(Not saying that will happen of course... at least maybe not in this story...)

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1246272 i hate rainbow...thinking she is better than everyone...

1246481 Ah i see.... kind of the reason I hate Rarity... she just acts so mainstream and up tight about the itty bitty things.

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1246519 aye...i don't like rarity ethier...i hate rainbow more

Ok I'm just about done with my term of school work. I'm probobly going to fail some classes too so if I do, it's because I've been working at every opportunity to write :twilightsmile: Next Chapter should be expected on thursday.

Oh the dramas I've had with this bucking chapter! I'ts small yes, but don't worry, it wont be long before the long withheld Slendermane makes his appearance

Yes it is very small :D

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yesssssss.....more bloodshed....soon

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It was so frustrating the amount of times this chapter escaped me, I decided to just halve what i wanted to write, and put it int the next chapter, you guys deserve better then to have to wait.
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It's coming my friend :pinkiecrazy:

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1326714 please let slendemane live....and not be imprisoned at the end...he's awsome...could be a sequl?

1327251 I'm pretty sure Slendermane is Immortal :derpytongue2: I could be wrong.

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