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Player 4


Favorite things to write and read about: cuddling, other forms of comfort, Human in Equestria stories, any combination of those. Also an aspiring musician and YouTuber. He/him.

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This story is a prequel to Fusion Genres


I am a human who really, really wants to go to Equestria. Strongly believing that it's possible, I undergo intense research into the possibility and concoct up a blend of crazy, never-heard-of-before science to spawn a portal and get to the land. When there, I must go down the path of a new life, with adorable, amazing ponies by my side along the way. How many friends will I make? And will I find a best friend forever?

(Story set beginning in June 2016)


Despite being published second, this story is the first part of the series Player 4 Goes to Equestria. Full series table of contents:

1. Magical Mission: Portal to a New Home - complete
2. Fusion Genres - complete
3. ?????????

Will be updated as series continues!


I decided to experiment with giving my chapters names. Let me know if you guys prefer this or just Chapter (number.) I'd love your feedback!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 19 )

Unit conversions:
1.2 meters - 4 feet
1.5 meters - 5 feet
1.7 meters - 5 feet 6 inches

15:00 - 3:00 PM
16:00 - 4:00 PM
17:00 - 5:00 PM
18:00 - 6:00 PM
19:00 - 7:00 PM
20:00 - 8:00 PM
21:00 - 9:00 PM

In case you were confused! :heart:

Can I ask for feedback here? I see the like-dislike ratio has worsened over time. I'm genuinely curious; what am I doing wrong?

I am an Earth human

As opposed to the humans who live where?

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Hmm, you do have a point. Looking at this, it is kind of weird that I put that there. Maybe I was subconsciously trying to distinguish myself from the Equestria Girls? Although, with that being said, I have no idea what planet they live on.

Should I remove that "Earth" part?

(Sorry about the late reply; my dumb notifications didn't catch your comment...)

10553491
It's gone now. Thanks for the feedback!

I'll be honest, that blurb makes me not want to touch this story with a 6 foot pole. I can literally feel the cringe radiating from it.

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I don't know what the blurb is, but don't worry. No use reading something you're not interested in!

I just can't believe it. Not only was this really real, but I had done it all in one afternoon. I started at about 12:30 (PM, to be exact); it is now 16:30, (a.k.a 4:30 PM) and I'm about to go to the place where my favorite characters that I've been dying to meet are located. A mere four hours of work to achieve my grand desire. Not bad, if I do say do.

Wha- How-
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Ah well, have fun in Equestria! :pinkiehappy:

This is something unexplainable
Unexplainable indeeeeed!
Explaining this no one will ever be able
Discord's chaos magic has been freeeeeed

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Discord's chaos magic has been freeeeeed

Hmm... now you just gave me an idea for this series, which is still ongoing. What if Discord is behind my ability to have done this?

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yes, my simple brain was very confused. :derpyderp1:


This chapter makes me feel like the ponies are up to something 'cause they've been acting so nice...
But I could be totally wrong 'cause ponies are supposed to be REALLY nice. I d'know.

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Good to know my unit conversions comment helped someone!

Do you want me to tell you what's going on with the ponies' demeanor, or do you want to read the story and find out?

Going with a shorter chapter this time, enabling me to nail this one down in only three days

:pinkiegasp:
First of all, this chapter was still extremely long and second of all, it was written three DAYS!!!

This chapter, is amazing
The way you explained how you went to Equestria, is amazing
Bro, you are just so bucking AMAZING!

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First of all, this chapter was still extremely long and second of all, it was written three DAYS!!!

Maybe it is long overall, but it is short for this story. One of the chapters here goes to over 10,000 words!

This chapter, is amazing
The way you explained how you went to Equestria, is amazing
Bro, you are just so bucking AMAZING!

Thank you so much :twilightsheepish:

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Maybe it is long overall, but it is short for this story. One of the chapters here goes to over 10,000 words!

...
and I still have trouble writing a chapter with 1,000 words

Comment posted by Ded account deleted May 11th, 2021
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