Slavery. He was born and grew up with, and is something he cannot tolerate. Trapped on a planet where everyone of his kind is a slave will bring the worst of the Lord of the Sith.
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A Fuckin' Masterpiece!
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Wow! Thank you for the high praise dude! Happy to not disappoint!
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Of course, I always wanted to read a crossover of Star Wars and MLP and this... is great.
My reaction: So, this is what the dream feels like, this is the victory we've longed for?
Thorax is in the hands of Vader. The question is what is Vader going to do with him?
Ooh, Vader's got an infiltrator in the ranks now! Toughen him up a little (or maybe just the debt he owes to Vader and/or the idea of what he's fighting for will be enough for him to start to better himself), and then tactical operations can begin.
The English can be a bit wonky sometimes, but its so good and true to Vader I don't care!
Hey man if you need an editor for just the slight English mistakes I'm seeing don't be afraid to hit me up in a personnel message. Otherwise, this is going great, and I can't wait to read more.
“Star Wars”
“Lore”
-.-
Wow:
1.
I wonder if Chrysalis and changelings are against humans, treat them as slaves, if not, there is still a chance for her to be an ally
2.
If she with changelings treats them like Equestrians do, then we have Throax ,someone who can usurp the queen.
Of course, if that happens I expect for them to not change with colors of a rainbow vomits but into something like below.
It would also fit with Vaders colors
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(In mine opinion, these designs should have been the ones they should have sticked wtih in the show)
The story is good, but is in need of an editor. There are quite a few errors.
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Ok...I'll be honest the color swap makes the reform Changelings look better and more acceptable compared to what they actually look like. I always hated their color scheme it's a bit too much for my taste.
Hmm, having a shapeshifter would be handy for infiltrating pony towns and freeing more slaves. Or even causing a little chaos and paranoia among the arrogant pompous pony mass.
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Agreed, I am trying to correct all the mistakes and language errors, however, my editor is off for a long time, so sorry for the mistakes
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What do you mean?
Is this Thorax the changeling or a human named Thorax?
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Disney nuked the Star Wars expanded universe so all this "lore" is either fanon bullshit or super recent stuff that only the cutting edge hardcore fans would know about.
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Send it to the Grammar Nazis?
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Changeling of course
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Good to know. I had a feeling it was the changeling but knowing Vader's views on the ponies I was not for sure.
Vader was a warrior, he cared for his men going by the Clone Wars series and his troops respected him in turn. Unlike some Jedi, Anakin Skywalker didnt waste there lives and led from the front. That transferred easily to the Stormtrooper Corp. Sadly it didnt transfer to the Fleets Officer Corp which was far more political. The last fight reminded me if the end of Rogue 1.
Vader, with his hard, reflective, pitch-black armor, is probably sexy as fuck to changelings.
What also would’ve been great if is Chrysalis was in Thorax’s place here. Thorax rebelled against Chrysalis, but he needed allies. That ally turns out to be Equestria.
As per agreement once Thorax disposes Chrysalis, the Changelings are to hand over all Humans to the Equestrians and to capture any escaped slaves.
Chrysalis however, escapes prison. She was chased, until she was rescued by Vader.
It’s kind of like my other fic, you’ve got the Griffins and the Minotaurs at odds with the Equestrians over slavery, and the Changelings are a wildcard.
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Dude, you literally managed to decipher what I was going to do for the story with Thorax.
Now I'm going to change everything so It don't look like I copied you xD
When you want to comment but others quicker than you have already said everything you can think about, and you just want more chapters to read because it's a good story
For those who want to see what a great fan film for Darth Vader is like, I highly recommend you check out Star Wars Theory's movie, Vader: Shards of the Past, Part 1.
Anikin (not sure if that's the correct spelling of his name) Is a freaking genius when it comes to tech, and fanagaling bits and pieces of technology. I'd imagine it wouldn't be that hard for him, maybe tedious, but not incredibly difficult.
thought. not tought
Why did the changeling bleed he was sliced with a light Saber which cauterize any wounds they make
Is that Pharynx? Good god, what the hell.
Ehh...
In a former chapter Celestia and Luna were speaking and in a inner monologue one of them (I believe it was Luna) commented how strange it was that the humans were enslaved but the changelings purified...
But suddenly Thorax is still under a Queens will...
Care to elaborate on this for me?
J
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Preach brother.
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God, you are unpleasant.
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Agreed! This story, while simple, not giving many details of the surroundings and people, has enough to rival most of the huge fish here, and it’s an even higher praise because English isn’t the writer’s main language!
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And, like any good fan with more than two neurons, we ignored what Disney said, they can whine all they want, the old canon is still the TRUE canon for us.
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Just like SWTOR
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And, thanks to Dave Filoni, pieces of the old canon are being reintroduced into Star Wars. God Bless Dave Filoni.
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A New Hope logic.
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I was wondering about that.
I guess using “huge” in the way you did is grammatically correct, it just doesn’t feel right though. Maybe use something else to help convey what you are writing better, like maybe say that he felt a grevious amount of pain, or crippling pain.