Slavery. He was born and grew up with, and is something he cannot tolerate. Trapped on a planet where everyone of his kind is a slave will bring the worst of the Lord of the Sith.
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So, Thorax is a Form V Djem So practitioner? I think this is the perfect form for Thorax to use and learn. First of all, he is learn from a master of this form. Secondly, when he uses this form he can enforces his will over his opponent.
All the magic and skill in the world pale in comparison to the Force. I just hope the girls survive.
On the other note, still waiting for Palpatine to start looking for his wayward apprentice.
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Like T-poses or something?)
I still wanna know exactly why Thorax got banished by the changelings, also Vader is going to absolutely wreck Twilight, no contest.
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Skyrim?
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I Like that nickname
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Fixed
If Fluttershy tries to use the Stare on Vader, it might result in her having a seizure. Cause who's stare's gonna come out on top? A timid pegasus who's glare scares weak willed animals, or the gaze of a being of raw anger, hate and sheer willpower?
Vader:just vibing
Main 6:and i took that personally
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Vader: BOLD WORDS FROM SOMEONE IN CHOCKING DISTANCE
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Vader: didn't think i could choke from half way across the galaxy did you, don't fail me like your previous commander, captain.
meanwhile
emperor: i feel like someone just copied what i did to count dooku.
damn what cliffhanger
No. NO.
If I remember correctly, Pinkie Pie kept taunting Fluttershy because Pinkie was convinced she was the oldest, but Fluttershy said mutiple times "I'm still older than you."
If not, forgive my outburst.
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I was thinking the same thing. I'm pretty sure I remember Flutters saying she was older when Pinkie was doing something.
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I can't remember the context but I distinctly recall Pinkie calling herself Auntie Pinkie to Fluttershy at one point which in turn Fluttershy tells her that she's older than Pinkie.
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I agree, its fact that Fluttershy is older than Pinkie, from the Mane 6 ages, I think Twilight is youngest, followed by Pinkie and Rainbow Dash, then Fluttershy, as for oldest, its either Rarity or Applejack
https://youtu.be/Kddzyds4fGo?t=21
(Ah, now we get the miniboss introductions! But with how easily Rainbow Dash was taken down... well, we'll see. And this is the group through the eyes of an Equestrian, Shining Armor, who I note is not stupid even as he's likely internalized pony hypocrisy, he understands the danger Vader presents. In any case, he's likely... biased, as the full capabilities of the Elements.)
The irony
...You know, I never did get why the Sith never used a Version of the Jedi Mind trick, was it because they were trying to be more lethal?
Shining is spelt with one 'n', you know?
It should be a quick ctrl-f command to fix this.
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Didn't know that... Thank you
Good chapter (15) for me to hit the halfway point since we finally see the Mane 6! One last comment for the night I guess.
The bit with Revan felt out of place, and I'm not even sure if it was necessary to the story. Also, not being familiar with the Old Republish era, makes it difficult to appreciate the reference.
Vader's personality changing doesn't really work. He must inevitable rejoin the Empire to face his destiny of killing the Emperor and saving his son. The very nature of this fic demands Vader can't ultimately change. So that feels weird to me to see him change.
It's also difficult to follow Thorax and Rainbow and the rest of the Mane 6 here. We know about them from canon, but this is an AU, so it's important to establish proper AU backstories for everyone (at least Thorax, who is clearly important and a backstory we haven't heard has been referenced a bit. As of this chapter the rest haven't been in the story for more than a chapter so they don't need backstories at this point).
My last point about the first half here is it does seem to be sudden how quickly the humans establish villages and a military hierarchy and all that. It's probably happening over a longer period of time than it feels... you do have time skips in your story, but it's difficult to feel them since they happen in just a sentence or two.
One of your comment replies to mine mentioned the difficulty in establishing a justice system. I agree... any trials of ponies would wait until after the new war Vader is starting up with the ponies is over. I do find it amusing you're having your humans establish other complex systems though.
PS: I nitpick because I am enjoying the story. :)
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Vader is above all a military leader, since when he was a Jedi he has participated in countless campaigns that made him experience not only in troop leadership, but also in logistics and organization.
Forming camps and supplementing them wasn't a difficult task for, and as time these communities grew and grew and became proper towns, Vader simply passed on what he learned to his underlings.
And thanks for the critiques, I'll pay more attention to this about centralizing and building a better backstory for each character.