Slavery. He was born and grew up with, and is something he cannot tolerate. Trapped on a planet where everyone of his kind is a slave will bring the worst of the Lord of the Sith.
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Great chapter cant wait for more
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Thank you, i appreciate it
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nice new look here have a strawberry 🍓
Nice chapter can’t wait
You know I had a thought for this fanfiction. It would be interesting if Vader encountered a human that was able to use the Force. Vader finds this human and then trains them in the ways of the Sith giving him a true and proper apprentice. That or Vader recreating the Inquisitors in some form.
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Do not worry, they will come when you least expect.
Just like the spanish inquisition
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Lmao.
I get the reference
But, isn't the Galactic Empire lawful evil, and not chaotic evil?
But you just said that peace is a lie! Quit messing with my head!
Vaders hatred of slavery has created a burning passion for justice and freedom among those he frees. Men like that do not go into chains again. They die on there feet.
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Noooooooobody expects! *Deep breath* THE SPANISH INQUISITION!!!
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Lmao.
No >:)
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well said
Sub-Zero: Be stealth as the night. Smoke: And deadly as the dawn.
Epic battle; The children of the Night vs The children of Vader.
Colin: Give me liberty! Or a bran muffin! Get my brown pants!
Derpy: Did someone say a muffin?
"Trough victory our chains are broken"
And then you will be broken...
“Ha Ha Ha, this is going to be VERY entertaining!“
I really imagined Oded Fehr narrating this. Chapter title could use some work, but I’d say you’re getting better.
I advise that Vader remains in the back, letting his followers do his bidding. He should only come out when they’re in trouble or a HVT needs to be dealt with.
But even with his teachings, his followers are still inexperienced, and don’t have a counter to Pegasi and Unicorns. Stick with guerrilla tactics. Ambush convoys targeting Unicorns and Pegasi first, use the thick forests as an advantage against Pegasi, etc.
I have an idea of how the Equestrians utilize airships (Basically wooden ships using balloons to float) and they strike their first blow on the Equestrian Armed Forces by taking down a trio of those ships using makeshift ballistas and slaughtering the survivors including an Admiral. Then taking the supplies and leaving the wreckage to be found.
Don’t need to go overboard with it. Just kill them swiftly (maybe except for Vader interrogating the Admiral for info before force choking him), and then taking the supplies. They can vary from crossbows, to swords, to food and medical supplies, to special “gems” that are used like grenades. For simplicity, they should be like early grenades but use crystals instead of black powder. That should place the tech level around Pre-Industrial.
I do like my Navy ships and some politics. Maybe some “ironclads” make appearances and Vader makes deals with the Minotaurs and Griffins to help him fight the ponies in exchange for a good word plus trade with the Empire of the Hand with Thrawn once he arrives. Thrawn commands a large Imperial force, but to have locals loyal to him governing the planet for him would ease his burden.
But it needs to be believable how they would believe Vader. Perhaps, the Griffins and the Minotaurs held a joint project together after unearthing a ship, one that once belogned to the Sith Empire. If Vader can activate and utilize that technology, then Vader’s claim of being an off-worlder and part of a Galactic Empire would be more believable.
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I agree, for the time being the only one capable of fighting the Unicorns and pegasus is Darth Vader himself, for the time being he still doesn't trust his followers enough, they are still extremely inexperienced and would be more likely to be discovered in the missions, Vader wants everything be done as discreetly as possible, for now he has managed to establish himself as the dominant figure of human resistance and has created a base of loyal followers, but they are still not well trained and prepared.
That's why he keeps himself in the dark, buying his time and getting ready, when he sees that his followers are capable enough he will send them, Equestria has a lot more problems than some angry slaves, but he doesn't want to take chances.
But good suggestions as always, and thanks for the criticism
Overall a good chapter but you need to make sure you read through it to catch spelling and grammar errors
I’m hoping to see more arrogant ponies try and stop Vader, only to beg for their pitiful lives. I’m also curious to see how Celestia and the mane 6 will react to this. Fluttershy will probably seek Vader out to help him, as I doubt she has any respect for her kind for how they treat humans.
Not even. Not nor.
Through*
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good catch
It's technically stealth if there are no living witnesses.
This is the first time I've seen the Sith Code used in a semi-positive light.
Also, I'm having such a hard time seeing the Equestrians as evil, but I'm sure I'll get used to it.
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I know that from experience :^)
It's like the thought process of "they can't call the cops if you killed all the cops" 10524088
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It’s not a war crime if you lose.
This is where the fun begins.
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You know it would be interesting if say the natives discovered a Clone-wars era Ship with equipment and armour that Vader has to keep out of enemy hands.
I say Clone wars era because I’m addicted to how the clone armour looks.
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Which is unlikely as water suddenly going upwards.
Well, I tried. This is as far as I go.
Funnily enough it was the techical problems, such as grammar issues, typos, etc, that did it for me, not the fact that the ponies are anthropomorphic.
Edit:
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Assuming that you mean a romance between a human and a pony, I can't say that that bothers me at all personally. Possibly because I've read and watched so much sci-fi that I just see funnily shaped people when I look at aliens.
This is why I stopped watching Star Trek: Deep Space Nine. I despise Sisko more than I can express with words. Despite loving the rest of the cast and the series he ruined it for me.
I do not think that is an actual word, maybe use "in the future" instead.
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ok brotha
Done
Listening to the Imperial March is a good Idea for this one
(Okay, so, Vader's getting a cult at this stage? I am one hundred percent behind that, I really hope the later chapters don't make my words here foolish.
Also, I've always thought the philosophy of the Sith was very personally empowering. Glad to see him teaching it to his people!)
oh good, someone shares my Opinion on those idiots
Imma stop you right there for a second. I guess I'm writing another bit now.
This description isn't realistic. Think from the rich ponies' perspective. They're going in to buy slaves, so they likely are going to be looking for the best ones they can find. So the sellers will make their slaves as presentable as possible. This would mean making sure they're bathed and otherwise cleaned up, wearing fresh, undamaged clothing, and ensuring there's no marks of mistreatment such as bearings or malnutrition (unless they can be hidden). So that is what I would expect Vader to see in a slave market targeting rich ponies.
Of course there may be markets targeting middle class or even lower class owners, in which case the standards would be a bit more lax, but the attempt to make slaves as presentable as possible would still be there, though the overall pick of slaves would not be as good. It sounds like maybe the market Vader is at may target all classes of ponies, so you'd see some less than perfect slaves, but they would probably still be cleaned up in clean clothing at least.
It sounds like you're depicting them in such a terrible state since Vader needs to be angered; but it wouldn't be a problem to change this in the story. Vader has been a slave. He would be well aware the slaves were just cleaned up and presented as being treated well and healthy to show them off and it was all a façade.
It's worth thinking about things like this to make a more immersive story. Something to keep in mind for the future.
You're also presenting human executions for pony amusement here. I think there are conflicting themes in your story. First is that humans are seen as sapient/sentient but ponies are enslaving them as they believe humans are inferior, even if they are sapient. However it is very difficult to acknowledge the sapience of a species and yet condone brutal treatment and killing, at least for most of a population (eg most ponies would probably be uncomfortable with the idea of needlessly killing something that can talk). On the other hand, if humans were viewed as animals, killing and mistreatment would be easier, but this doesn't fit into the fact they talk in your universe.. (In the fic Your Human and You takes, which I am guessing is an inspiration for this fic, humans there lack sapience at first, and are only gaining it slowly, and most ponies don't notice. This explains their mistreatment since they are seen the same as trained dogs.)
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I agree with you, the simple act of slavery is already justification enough to make Vader angered. But in history, we can always read about how the deplorable conditions that slaves went through day after day, from the Roman Empire to the Ottoman, From the British to the French, cases like this were extremely common and i want to show that.
Especially for a small-to-medium town like this, where the middle class would only care so much about how their slaves looked and cared for so much that they were left in proper working conditions.
And yes I'm going to show conditions where slaves live better, but here Vader was exploring a poor region bordering the Crystal Empire, not a big metropolis like Canterlot so cases like this would be normal.
And I was really inspired by YHaY