Slavery. He was born and grew up with, and is something he cannot tolerate. Trapped on a planet where everyone of his kind is a slave will bring the worst of the Lord of the Sith.
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I don't know about you, but I have a bad feeling that more than 2 sapient beings are about to have a bad day.
Can’t wait for Vader to go Rogue one on the ponies
10378794
And it will be glorious!
Just saying, I think it would be better if it was a longer chapter. At least in the 3000-5000 word mark. More is better.
Also, better come up with an explanation on how Vader ended up there. I call BS that Green Squadron pulled it off when they got dickpunched a lot.
PM me if you want. I do have a suggestion on how Vader ended up there.
somebody bouta have a bad day
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Sapient.
10378837
Lovely correction on that, a lot of people seem to mix those two words up
Amazing job with the chapter 2 cliffhanger, can't wait for Mr. Vader potater to do some more choaky poky XD. Seriously though, great story so far.
BTW this story goes great with Doom OST
It´s a bad time hour, please continue man!
10378837
Thank you.
Well, good SW fics are a rarity here.
And you DID a good job in the build up)
10378889
Thank you! I am really working hard to do a good fic!
10378794
Heads will roll.
Would have had potential, if not for the fact it's fucking anthro.
10378934
Understandable, glad you got interested, sorry for not meeting your standards
Don’t read it if u don’t like it. I’m enjoying this
10379032
Thank you, I am happy that there are people who are enjoying my story, everyone has tastes, if you don't like my story look for another one, this site is huge, certainly have something you like! and I'm sorry if I did something wrong that you guys didn't like, I'm working on fixing it
You had my curiosity, but now you have my full attention.
I can tell I'm gonna enjoy this fic.
10378934
Sounds like a personal preference issue. Don't get me wrong, I prefer OG ponies in my fanfiction as well, but saying it has no potential just because it's anthro is a little much.
10379040
You didn't do anything "wrong", exactly. They just don't like anthro.
10378952
You, sir, get props for the polite reply. You're a better person than I. Best of luck with your story!
10379064
You had no intention of offending me, then why would i be rude? and thank you! keep on the good work you too!
10379072
*blinks* I don't have any stories... I've got a list of favorites, but I don't have any published stories of my own. Are you confusing me for someone else?
10379079
Oh... Then I confused you for another dude, shit....
Well, keep doing a great work with whatever you are doing lmao
10379089
First you had my attention. Now you have my erectio-. Wrong Show! Let me just say that you've got my attention considering their aren't many quality Star Wars fics and I will indeed watch how you develop this with great interest. As long as you don't plan to Rey all over it it'll be fine!
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10379171
Lmao no homo, But thanks! I Hope to live up to your expectations!
IM SO HYPED! LET’S GO!
Great cliffhanger this is! See what happens next, Can’t wait! take your time and plan! seen too many fimfics fall. your life prioritize and fly! To a conclusion is nigh!
were not where
10379257
I Will give you a hint, "Magic"
Lord Vader is about to resize their fucking holes in more ways then one when he gets angry about one of them being a dick to him or another human
10379281
Vader + equestrian magic?
Anthro ponies...? And humans...?
Now I'm more interested in the science of this than the actual story,
I hope Darth Vader Pounds Celestia to the ground and wins
Fuck em up Vader
Kill em all vader leave none alive
So why would Vader care? This is a crossover with Your Human and You, right? In that story (if I remember correctly that is) the premise was that the humans on their world were non-sapient. Basically the equivalent to farm animals in the real world.
10379062
Well, I for one have no problem with anthro mlp characters. They're my favorite. However with that said, I can't say I blame people like that guy for disliking it.
Sadly to say most of the anthro mlp fanfics, that had been posted on this site from over the years and most recently has....always seem to leaned towards the NSFW material. There's more of that than any other genre of anthro mlp story unfortunately.
There are some good stories on this site. However you have to dig beneath all the clop fics and other filth to find them. That's just the honest truth of the matter.
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And the ones that are actually good, either take a long time to update or they end up abandon by the author and left permanently unfinished. Which is quite unfortunate.
10379900
Yes i know, however this is not how my humans will act in this world, i let very clear that is INSPIRED, that mean, that i took many aspects of it, however shaped in my own, get it?
10379900
Normally you would be right. However this is a star wars crossover. So you cannot assume the human slaves are the same ones from You and Your Human.
And if you have paid attention to this chapter. It mentions these humans were defeated and enslaved. Meaning these humans had fought with the ponies in the past. Which must have been quite bad, if Celestia decided to have them under enslavement instead of making peace or reforming them.
Regardless of her reasons, it is still wrong for Celestia do to this, no matter how much she rationalized it. The act itself goes against the very values and ideas of pony culture. At this point both her and her people look like absolute hypocrites to the rest of their homeworld.
Furthermore, I hated to see what the Crystal Ponies political relations is like with the Equestrians. Being former slaves themselves. My guess....it is on a razor's edge.
10380222
Exactly! You get my backstory! i will make it a lot deeper with time.
Work a little bit on the grammar and you'll have a chance on my personal fav list. Xd
10380297
That would be an honor! i am working hard to correct those mistakes, so don't worry
10378934
I kind of agree with the anthro thing. The whole story is about alien races meeting up, and by making the ponies humanoid, a massive chunk of the alien-ness is immediately removed. I don't see it detracting from the story very much, but the Ponies now feel like some random, run-of-the-mill humanoid alien species that one might find clinging onto the crusty underside of the Star Wars galaxy, like the humanoid teddybear aliens, the humanoid giant-growly-dog aliens, the humanoid tentacle-head aliens, the humanoid frog aliens, the humanoid pig aliens, and the humanoid reptile, totally-didn't-shoot-first aliens.
Basically, Star Wars is oversaturated with different alien species that are far more human-shaped than they need to be or even should be, and Pony aliens have added to that unnecessarily, in my opinion.
Source of the cover image? How can you expect me to eat without any SAUCE!!
But seriously though, I'll give this a look when there's more to it. More that three chapters at least. Don't want a two chapter story taunting me after getting engrossed.
10380222
So not only are the ponies anthro, but the humans are actually sapient? In that case, why mention Your Human and You in the description at all? That's basically the entire foundation of the premise for that story, and without it this reads like a more generic enslaved human theme than anything inspired by another story.
But yeah, I get what you mean and it makes sense.
10380421
This. Making them anthro just removes a huge chunk of the culture clash feeling and also feels pretty pointless.
10380421
Sadly MOST Sci-Fi and fantasy properties are overpopulated by humanoid races. Star Trek is particularly egregious about it. And how many MMOs (or games in general) can you name that have distinctly non-humanoid playable races? The only reasons for it are to give the reader/player a sense of familiarity (which I would rather NOT have. I read fiction to ESCAPE from the familiar), and a lack of imagination. Ah, but I'm ranting.
Anyhow, yes, that is part of the reason I despise anthro so much.
10380612
Hey, if you don't like the story's concept that much than stop reading and following it and find some other story that suits your interests.
Simple as that.
However despite how you might feel about it, or what your personal preference in stories might be, it is the author's story and their choice of what it's going to be. End of story.
But if you're going to be petty about it, than asked author why they chose this or that and move on.
That's all I'm going to say on the matter, now let me and the others enjoy the story.