Slavery. He was born and grew up with, and is something he cannot tolerate. Trapped on a planet where everyone of his kind is a slave will bring the worst of the Lord of the Sith.
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Man this is truly a great story I can’t get enough I think I saw some typos on the the end of this chapter by the way.
The soldier armor reminds me of the old republic things I've seen. I really like it. really cool
I love the soldier armor
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This must be the most random comment I've ever received lmao
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what do you mean? and thank you
Vader is about to wreck there shit.
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If you like this design then look at this
Samuel Kim Musi has a lot of Star Wars x medieval and similar music
Like this
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Never mind man I probs just made a mistake when reading I read fast just know that I think the story is great
Just send the minions to kill/burn/murder the stallions, rape the mares, and eat the foals alive.
this is a great story
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WTF!!?? Darth Vader is a Bad Guy/Villain. But, NOT that Evil!!! Ok, he did killed/destroyed the Tuskens Raiders. Killed, and kidnapping Jedi Younglings, and take over Planets and enslave the population ( Despite Vader Despise that part) for the Imperial Empire. But, while Darth Vader or his Human Soldiers can Torture or Kill the Stallions/Mares. They are NOT Rapists, or Frickin Child Cannibals!
Plus, it's makes them no better than those OOC Pony Slavers!
Don't you remember what Darth Vader said in Internal Struggles:
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Pretty pog
Vader himself could take the city. Alone. No army could stand against him. O ly thing that ever stopped Vader was Vader.
Well...that city is boned.
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Thug 1: Look what you've done! You skipped the process!
Thug 2: What process?
Thug 1: The process of breakin' and enterin'! You're supposed to shoot the husband, rape the wife, then shoot the wife! But you just shot the husband then shot the wife!
Thug 2: It don't matter none!
Thug 1: Sure it does! Now we can't rape her!
Thug 2: Sure we can! Body's still warm!
Thug 1: Look, I know we're shootin' and rapin', but necrophilia's a step too far.
Thug 2: Well if you're so hung up about the process, why didn't you perform a five-point room scan?
*child charges hysterically around the corner with a makeshift weapon*
*Thug 1 shoots the child*
Thug 1: I'll take responsibility for that. That is what happens when you do not perform a five-point room scan.
Thug 2: Alright, then you go do a five-point room scan, and I'll get to the raping.
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I feel bad for laughing at this
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Sorry, i Will try to improve myself
Cómo se llaman ellos ¿Slave trooper?
......HOLY FOK-[blue screened on pc]
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Pay evil unto evil.
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Can you explain it further, Please? I'm a bit confused?
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Se llaman 'Verdugos Renegados' or 'Forsaken Executioners', esos guerreros no muertos si estás preguntando
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Ah, I see. Pay evil unto evil. Tit for tat and all that. So now you've killed the father, raped the mother, and eaten the children of at least one family. So what's the plan when you find people who you've arbitrarily decided death is too good for? Do you induct them into slavery? Seems like the logical place to go from murder, rape, and cannibalism. Well congratulations. Now you're exactly the kind of monster you were speaking of fighting. Remember to save a bullet for yourself!
But seriously, what separates decent people from monsters is standards. Decent people pay justice; not evil, unto evil. If that justice includes death, so be it. Just make sure it's worth it, and for fuck's sake don't immerse yourself any deeper into your personal darkness. That's where monsters are created.
I guess . . . I guess I'll try one more anthro story. This just seems too interesting to not at least attempt to read it despite how much
I absolutelyloathe anthro ponies rub me the wrong way.I have no idea why I feel that way. I have nothing against anthro stuff in general, it's just something about anthro ponies that seriously bothers me. And I have tried over and over to read stories with anthro ponies, and I usually can't force myself to read more than a few chapters before I just can't stand it.
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Thank you friend! It is an honor to know that even though you hate the genre you have the courage to read this! I hope you enjoy! Otherwise, tell me what you didn't liked of and tell me that I will correct it.
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¿No muertos o muertos vivientes, que queda mejor?
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Less hate, more like some sort of very strong and deep-seated discomfort.
I was almost giddy the first time I saw the old cover art (the new one is awesome, btw) and read the description. Then I saw the tags and closed the tab.
Then I kept seeing it pop up in the "Also Liked" under stories again and again, and I suppose seeing it so often wore me down until now when I've given in to the temptation to try and read an anthro story just one more time.
But at least it isn't non-magical, completely humanized ponies in an otherwise identical Equestria. Those make my brain and my suspension of disbelief hurt.
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Muertos vivientes claro, pero así fue como el traductor decidió nombrar jajajaja
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Hey, everyone has their tastes, I can't judge because I also have some stories that bothered me too much because it was a romance between pony-humans, and because of that I didn't even read or stopped reading it right away, or hated a character so much that when I saw him, I stopped reading and changed to another story.
I hope I can reach your standards.
dont put spaces when you are doing this.
WE/Humans and THEM/Everybody else
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fixed
please remove the "this is the edited sentence, i hope you like it" that wasn't supped to be part of the edit
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O shit i didn't noted that i added that lmao
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Sorry for not meeting your expectations, thank you for at least giving me a chance
Leader sends army to attack vader
Vader :i knew you would do that so i did this
Me:uh lord vader you been watching death note?
Imagine if Thrawn helped Vader as a strategist.
Equestria would be lost under a month.
Love the design of Vader's Faction armor! I can only imagine how the upcoming battle is going to go. I can already hear the Jedi Temple March with the marching sound coming up.
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I'm surprised you didn't offer to help edit it.
Everyone can criticize, but it takes skill to actually try to help fix it.
When I find a good story with issues, I fix a chapter and submit it to the Author in private. Often without being asked. Sometimes Im ignored, sometimes they tell me to go pound sand, most of the time they use my edits.
I can tell you right now the Author is most likely a foreign language speaker. " John grabbed the blade and would hand it to the knight." Using would as an action word is common from several English as a second language speakers.
Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan
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Another protective angel of mine in the comments haha! Don't worry about that man because he really is correct, my story is not good, I see how many mistakes I made for many times spelling mistakes, wrong paragraphs etc. Criticizing is very easy because finding a mistake and pointing it out is very easy, but fixing it is much more difficult, these people who come to comment on these mistakes and say 'hey this is wrong', 'hey you got it wrong here', is always good.
Because when they criticize me and make me see what I did wrong, it always motivates me to correct it in case the next person reads it, they don’t see the same mistake, they warn me instead of simply changing history and shitting for it, and makes me very happy.
And beautiful people like YOU who actually volunteer to help me out makes my heart melt! Actually caring for this shit story is incredible! And it is honestly the only thing that keeps me going!
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Was reykan the dude with the Rasputin Changeling or are you quoting someone else?
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That quote is by the Author Reykan and I believe its from the story Twisted Fate
The Monk
“To say that Twilight Sparkle went bugfuck would be like saying the Incredible Hulk had some mild anger management issues.” -DustTraveller
Now I just imagine what the Star Wars universe be like if it had fantasy/medieval motif to it from seeing that image.
That Armor is a medieval style of the phase I armor of the chorusant guard.
I was wondering what they looked like and about the organisation, the names of the units seem to fit a “Modern” military which is not what Vader has its more a “Sword and shield” military so names like battalion and squad seem out of place.
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Medieval knowledge must be something long forgotten in Star Wars, and I'm sure that Vader was not a story buff lmao, but the worst of that was that most of these organization names I did not take from modern armies, I used the organization of Genghis Khan of ancient Mongols who surprisingly have an organization shockingly similar to those of today (apart from the rankings)
I see that Vader has created the Roman Legions in Equestria.
The soldier armor has more in common with Clone Trooper armor than Storm Trooper in terms of design. Guess we know which ones Vader prefers.