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Black Lives Matter, this isn't hard


This story is a sequel to She Contains Multitudes

A hivemind of sapient zooplankton is having a bad day. Pinkie Pie and Celestia, despite their efforts, are part of the problem.

You should probably read the prequel.
Proofread by Sky_Paladin and Milk and Honey.

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This is the greatest story I've ever read

Step 1) Jump onto beach to get food
Step 2) Uum..... belly full?

Luster Dawn is plankton is now canon. This fic has sold me—or rather, showed me how obvious it was.

Great job as always, Ragnar. I honked less on the re-read, but it's still brilliant. Favorite excerpt:

The gnats struggled to grasp the concept of a pointless conversation, but eventually succeeded. Here was a predator, or perhaps a Pinkie Pie, that could inflict foreign cognitions on another entity. A truly novel hunting and defensive strategy, to make its victims stop and think. How unfortunate that true communication between two beings was impossible!

People appear to actually be clicking on this fic for whatever reason, so I'm assuming it's related to your suggestions on the description and cover art. Turritella fossils were a good lead.

Yeah, on reflection, Celestia is being a little unfair here. It works fine for the Kool-Aid Man.

"Meet Luster Dawn."

Oh nooooo

Great story!

I adore this as well. What a talented author. All theses stories and not a single one is a miss

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