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Luna, retired, receives a letter from Poppy, an art prodigy with terrible nightmares. She agrees to help.

Tonight, Poppy will discover there is Nothing to be afraid of.

Edited by Sky_Paladin.

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Comments ( 4 )

Well, this is long overdue, but late is marginally better than never. The following is all sincere, despite its egregious nature. I love this.

There is so much to say about this story. The interpretation of Luna as mature but conflicted with askew social skills, the dry humor, the dark humor, the black humor, the novel and evocative description and the world-building and imagery and understanding of art and dreams and MLP and writing on display have me beside myself with a multitude of positive emotions; emotions like delight, mirth, enraptured, an occasional chill. I love your dialogue and I love Poppy, especially Poppy. I'm trying to come up with something more coherent and clear than saying she bites and draws blood, but that is the emotion I feel. I mean it in a sincere and positive way.

I think I need to make a blog post concerning this story, partially review, partially education, majority fangirl-esque gushing. Would you mind my liberal use of excerpts as illustration of exceptional writing to learn from? But don't be too lenient, lest I simply copy and paste the story over and go blow-by-blow.

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How could I possibly complain? Thanks for the kind words.

FM
FM #3 · Oct 11th, 2020 · · ·

This fic slaps! Characters are fun and interesting, pacing is just as brisk as it needs to be, and that spicy finish - great stuff.

One of the best Lunas and Twilight is great for 2 seconds. Poppy is also cool. I really like essentially every single bit of this. Just outstanding work

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