• Member Since 25th May, 2020
  • offline last seen September 28th

Keyslam


Write with intent behind every word. Say hi to Tonkus for me. :)

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Sometimes, it's better to forget. Everything becomes nothing, and nothing becomes everything.

You find yourself existing in the here and now, and that is all that matters.

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Comments ( 5 )

Dang. Dang.

This is... beautiful. Iʼm honestly speechless. This is a beautiful piece of art. Itʼs abstract and yet, you can feel the characterʼs pain and confusion. “What's real anymore?” You definitely deserve an upvote.

(May I suggest you tag it [Second Person]? Since the story speaks directly to us.)

You gave me chills at the beginning. It was frightening how similar the characterʼs situation is to mine. At the time I was reading this, I was in my room, alone in the dark, when I was supposed to be sleeping.

Another mug of tea is set down beside you. Reaching with a hoof, you wrap your fingers around the handle and pull it into your blanket mountain.

This line is incredibly breathtaking.

Hats off, my friend!

10297373
Thanks! I'll go ahead and add the tag. :twilightsmile:

Hey there! Greetings from the My Little Reviews & Feedback group. Here's the review you requested. I hope you find it helpful.

10411984
Alright. Thanks for the review!

Wow. Techie, this is just breathtaking.

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