Drake has had a rough, street life. When he meets up with an oddball stranger instead of an old friend, he is given a second chance. But in the cheesiest was possible. As a drake... but worst of all, he's part cat, and Drake hates cats! But now he must cope with his new body, and some odd new acquaintances, as he makes his journey towards his redemption.
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Pretty good, could use a little more detail but still, it's a great story so far.
I will watch and wait. It's interesting, but I want to know more. I like it so far.
FUCKING DISCORD!!!
Interesting. Will track.
Interesting I guess?
racist guards these days
welp there bucked nuff said
Nice can't wait for more.
Hey! Glad you guys like the story. Tell me if you like the new cover image. I made it myself. If it's too small, I'll change it back to the original cover image I had selected. And don't forget to comment question Drake or Mason please. It is the only way I will be able to release a Q&A starring Drake and Mason. As always, good night dragons and drakes.
This has potential...i will be watching this BUT you need to be more indepth like other writers
Wat.
Also
decent defense stance
>not descent defense stance.
My amounts of WAT are too damn high...
2846335 This was my first story and it was last updated months ago. I'm going to get back to it soon but for now it's going to stay a mindfuck. Sorry
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Talking to your self op?
Oh and...pro tip: write this in someone's POV(point of view) instead of both..do it in either drakes point of view, daniels(heh thats my name) or as one of the mane six..seriously switching and not saying anything makes a cluster buck of your typing..
and pro tip: 'heh'= though
"potato" = chat
Why not make it
Thought = italic's
Chat: "words" or bold?
so pretty much:
"hello!"
*meh ive seen better*
(i have no idea how to format..)
2846389 When I get back to it I'm going to rewrite the entire damn story and make improvements as I go. For now though, I'm working on fixing up A Cubical World and am working on A Twisted Mind, Strewn About the Multiverse.
Sledge hammers? Glowing dragon tattoos? What's next? Cats with scales and wings?
well, that escalated quickly.
So what is Drake's brother anyway? Criminal overlord? The insane President of the Rainbow Factory?
MOAR
4328086 Sorry, haven't been on FiM in a while. Glad you like the story, but before I continue it I have to refurbish it. Rewrite a bit. Probably won't get to that until the Summer, sorry, but luckily that's soon. 20 Days or so. Glad you like the story, keep watch though for in case I update this early. This was my first story, so the writing's rather shit in my personal opinion. At least compared to what I should be able to do.
4355428 nooooooooooooo
oh well, back to binge gaming
...I haven't even finished the first sentence, and I can already tell that this needs some proofreading.
The only thing more important than the first paragraph of a story is the synopsis. Those two things draw a reader in and grab attention. You need those to be as great as possible, because screwing them up can drive readers off before they start.