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Well, that was... intense! But good~
Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinteresting...
So...I wonder what Twilight and her friends would eventually find, when they descend into the Forest...
Extremely messed up? Well as long as it's not like that one Chrysalis fic I read... or the other Chrysalis one... and the Twilight one... yeah maybe you're right I should go
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This is not a snuff fic. There is no blood, gore or torture in this one. However, in terms of sex, it's probably as messed up as you can get. So discretion is advised if you want to keep whatever innocence you have left.
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When did I mention snuff fics?
man…
man…
man…
I know that feeling. I KNOW that feeling.
What started out as pure pron turned into an EXTREMELY accurate depiction of the desire for…ONE-NESS.
I’ve seriously had similar thoughts at times when I’ve been with my wife. The desire to truely become one with someone is real. And I’ve lived it.
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The feeling of being able to unite with the one you love is one of the greatest, is it not?
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It is. It really is.
Alien, kinky, and surprisingly wholesome.
In my opinion, writing tentacle porn is hard and I say this is a successfull attempt. I like the descriptions of the plant's... let's call it organs. And I also like how this chapter didn't fall into the trap of making it seem as though the plant wanted sex. It wanted to put its seeds inside Luna. Another positive is that the plant has a character of its own, which is another trap that some tentacle porn can fall into.
There were grammatical mistakes, but didn't distract from the story, and the kinky narration was true to the porn. Well done on this chapter.
On to the next!
Powerful ending, if you asked me. The story itself is heavy with fetishes, and works.
The grammatical mistakes are there, but whatever. The story gets itself across, and that is what matters in the end. The only thing that bothered me is that you kept using 'limp', instead of 'limb'. And that I would have liked more of an emotional response from Celestia when Luna opened up to her.
But, good job anyway.
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Thanks. Can you tell me the grammar mistakes so I can fix?