Gummy is a happy alligator normally but Pinkie notices he looks down recently. So being Pinkie, she MUST cheer him up, and with that frame of mind, she sets off to visit Fluttershy to see if she can find out what's wrong. However, cheering up Gummy may require more than she once thought.
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Well I like where this is going but the romance tag kind of bafels me, who falls in love with whom?
Well you're off to a good start my friend.
Nice story. I'm looking forward to Fluttershy's advice.
Looking forward to more
It... goes... so... fast... cannot... compute...
I know this is something for your spare time, but PLEASE.
Dialogue.
Description.
Needs balance.
Thanks for the comments:)
@SuperPinkBrony12, you'll find out later!
so... is this going to continue, or not? I'd rather not read it if it isn't going to continue at all.
I'm rather impressed, other then a few errors your doing very well, I shall read on, really hoping this is a Pinkie/Gummy romance
Damn, you were doing so well to and then you really seem to not seprate when the others were speaking, I would highly suggest an editor for this chapter and more to come, I really like where you are headed with this though so I shall await more