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PinkieShy157 stories ·320 members

Little Sad Story

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A story of two silly ponies,Pinkie and Fluttershy.The things they will be passing by and the story with other ponies,they will never forget.

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Sadness in your eyes · 5th Feb 2014 · 1,177 words
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Long night · 12th Feb 2014 · 1,382 words
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Night Games · 18th Feb 2014 · 1,344 words
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The Letter · 26th Feb 2014 · 1,428 words
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xXLotSoFriendshipXx #1 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · · Sadness in your eyes ·

Hmm... I like were you are going with this you just got to work on some spelling and sentence placement things, otherwise nice story....
or first chapter of a story.
I...
Will...
Be....
Watching....

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Silverwind9 #3 · Feb 6th, 2014 · · · Sadness in your eyes ·

3903523 Thank you very much! I know that I made some mistakes,and thanks for pointing that out.I will be awared of that in further writing.
PS.I know that I made spelling mistakes,but oh well,mistakes happen and I'll fix that through the other chapters.
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