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the dark, burning remnants of Pony Ville. how could the emotions of just one being cause all of this destruction and pain? how could his love turn to hate? how could his Joy turn to rage? 3 words, thats all it took. 3 simple, yet devastating words. "LEAVE ME ALONE" I got the idea for this story while listening to the song "Baby" by Serj Tankian.

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To think one of the best artists of our time inspired you to make this fic. Kudos :twilightsmile:

1138865 Hopefully it’ll get better as I progress in the story, but if you have any opinions or ideas on how I can improve. Please don’t hesitate to tell me. Thanks for you’re thoughts!

Interesting...
I haven't read any fics in which spike destroys Ponyville.
and looses his memory.
wonder how this will develop...
please continue
:twilightsmile:

I do like the concept. I will be watching as the story progresses. :ajsmug:

You really caught my attention. I mean i just started reading fimfics, ad this one is really good. Im looking forward to reading chapter 2 :derpytongue2:

Read this, figure out what you did wrong, and fix it. This could be promising, but right now, it's a mess.

good!=)

Huh. This is pretty solid, in my eyes. The only things that threw me off were the lack of capitalization at certain points and how short it felt. Everything else was good to me, and I found it enjoyable. :twilightsmile: I eagerly await the next chapter.

Ok everyone, so to make it clear as to whats going on with this story. I'm going to find time to work on it when my schedule is less packed. recently I've had a lot of school work that needs to get done. I need to put a lot of focus into my instruments and compositions for school (I go to a preforming arts high school), and on top of all of that I've had several early and late rehearsals at school in preparation for a large number of performances this month as well as the next. I’m letting you guys know all of this so that you are aware It’s going to be a while before the next chapter comes up, so thanks for understanding. :scootangel:

Are you going to finish this story?

1500425 yes he just needs time like he said for the last 3 times

Hello Everybody, So I Just wanted to say I’m truly sorry for the delay on the next chapter. Again I’ve been very busy (so busy in fact I completely forgot about the story up until now) And I promise that I will have the next chapter up by Thanksgiving. I thank you all again for your patience. :eeyup:

1623220 I hope you have it up soon.:rainbowdetermined2:

1694628 Thank you, and hopefully I will. I was hoping that I could get it up in time but I was hit with a creative slump… still am. When I started writing this story I knew exactly what I wanted to do with it but I didn’t have a lot of time to work, and ended up forgetting about it. Now I have more time, but forgot my ideas. Hopefully inspiration will strike again and I can start writing again. :derpytongue2:

1710989 Well look at the story description and it might ring some bells. Also listen to that song again.

Is this gonna continue?

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