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Wow... seriously wow. The ovipositioning tentacle monster was taken in by Sweet Pop big time. What an actress!
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It was a really hard sell, but she managed to find a way.
filly's and innocent my butt xD
i liked it a lot ;)
For a sec... I thought this was gonna end up as a jpke where it was scootaloo who were the filly...
And that she would end up "laying" the egg.
That was pretty good.
Will there be a sequel?
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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I did think of using Scootaloo, but I didn't think her personality would match for what I was going for, so I decided against it. Could have put in a few more puns if I did use her though.... Oh well, background fillies always need more love.
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Not sure what that is, but I did find the chapter names overly easy to make into a pun.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Don't think there will be a sequel for this one, but stay tuned for all my other stories that I may or may not write in the next decade.
"YOU WILL GIVE ME AN EGG" - Albert Wesker
Lucky encounter.
The story is good but I am legitimately disappointed by the ending. So little detail about how the tentacle actually lays its egg. You could have used more detail describing how the egg tries to squeeze through her cervix, how impossibly tight she is in there. The tentacle's feeling when it first enters her womb. How her belly distorts (slightly/greatly) as the egg is finally put in there.
Also, would love a sequel where the filly gives birth to the egg.
Kind of wish Sweet Pop had looked back and smiled right afterward.
Alternatively, that it would have had more issues getting the egg through her lips, only for it to feel a pair of hooves grasping the tentacle right behind the egg and helping to push it in.
Still rather good, mind you.
And that's how science is done!
Here, have a minor correction.
There shouldn't be an apostrophe there.
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Fixed. Thanks!
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Fixed both. Thanks!
Please make a sequel.