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Thanks! And glad you liked it! It took a few months to make so I hoped it turned out alright
A wonderful concept! I love those sorts of games and loved all your little nods to their rules and logic. I think you've done a real good job here translating the experience of playing a H-platformer into a piece of erotic fiction.
Actually somewhat inspired to attempt my own take on the topic, though I think you already mined most of the good ground here.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Those are certainly interesting types games and I wanted to expand upon it in a way that I could. But if you have an idea, go for it. We always need more content
that was wonderfull to read, and all the suprises ^^
awesome work :)
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Thanks!
Hmm.
What i enjoyed most here was the mentions of Daring's backstory and the journal bits.
But i also liked the fall into lewd with voluntarily losing.
Very nice! I always love a good tentacle story and you really know how to do that, Though, can't see why I got the like for it from.
Anyway, nice add with filly daring do, that's really rare
This chapter feels an awful lot like a platformer video game, like Megaman or Super Mario.
Edit: I just noticed that the description mentioned this. Now I feel dumb.
Is that some kind of typo, or is that an actual word? Web-searching it didn't bring up any useful results, so I have no idea what it means.
So... what happened to the final boss? Did it just not appear when Daring went towards the exit again?
You weren't kidding...
There was even an double jump!
I sure weren't the only one who kept hearing video game noises in the first half.
About the second half:
Who would build something like this? And why?!
Well, we may see in the next chapter(s).
Yay! Respawn!
...Technically correct.
Only time can tell.
It starts to sound like she got trapped in some kinky amusement park of an forgotten civilization.
Good, because I was already worried about that one.
Always stay optimistic!
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She had to start writing her adventures somewhere. And it isn't a lewd platformer if you don't try out all the bad
goodendings10483191
And yes, the filly Daring Do is rare... like impossibly so to the point that I don't think there's any. There are no fics or pics anywhere I could find with filly Daring Do being lewded. Need moar!
Glad you liked it, I want to monopolize the tentacle/foalcon market and hope that I'm doing a good job at that.
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Also, yes, error and I fixed it, ty. And regarding the final encounter: 
Yes, it just might be like a platformer.
"It would have been nice to say that she beat the final creature on her next try, a real good ending to her adventuring book, but that… was not the case."
It took her many, many more times to get through. But like most platformer bad
happyendings, much of it would have been the same, and who wants to read more about Daring getting lewded over and over again in the exact same way?10493153
Thanks for all the comments 
10493177 Sexy amusement part confirmed. Fun for the whole family!
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they sustain me10493663
Agreed, keep up the good work!
They are going to innocently tickle her hooves senseless, right?
Ancient ruins (and especially ancient traps inside those ruins) can be very patient...
(They have to be, considering how "often" visitory are coming.)
What does the expert say? Which "trap" is the better one so far?
I wonder how they would react.
Would they rather faint on the spot, laughing out loud or simply patting her proudly on the back?
That how archeologists always work!
At least in stories and movies...
What do you mean with "just"?
A pet sounds great! But I suspect it will stop working the moment it leaves the temple.
Assuming time has any meaning at all.
For all we know, the flow of time inside this amusement park (?) differs from the time of the outside world.
Until a certail filly disrupts its perfectly balanced work cycle.
I have been here long enough to know where this is going...
I was already afraid this was intended to be an unbeatable boss who will release her afterwards out of goodwill; including the gift it gave her, of course.
Now I'm curious: What else was there?
It was interesting to read, too!
Good work.
Also, the platformer aspect was a nice touch.
And how did her parents react? (Did she tell them in the first place?)
Nice work! I liked the whole save points bit. Heck, the whole platform-game format was a hoot.
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Oh, they're going to tickle her. Not innocently though.