A spin-off to Solaris Night's Lost Wolf series. A year before the events of the Tale of a Lost Wolf.
A human girl mysterious awakens in a new world called Inu, which is constantly in war between humans and Kanisars and she happens to be a part of it. After being rescued by the half-Kanisar by the human king forces, Maxwell Kyochi, she joins the resistance and makes new friends and enemies in the process.
Together with her new allies, they formed together as a team to save all of Inu while she searches for a way to find out how she got here and why she was even here in the first place.
Will she find her destiny in Inu? And what will she expect in this strange new world filled of Kanisars? Find out on Dawn of the Lost Wolves!
Chapters (3)
Do any of the female characters throw punches in this story?
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Well of course.
Should've told me you've written the chapter. I'm liking what I've read so far and can't wait for more.
However there are a few things that bug me. One are the grammatical errors. I'm not saying you should rewrite the chapter just to correct them (I'd be a hypocrit if I did), but you should keep an eye out in the future. The other thing is that you gave Max one of Triders moves and I won't say that, that in itself is bad (I mean he could've learned it from Trider after all or copied it from him), but what I am worried about is that I don't know if you plan on having Max know all of Triders moves, you can come up with some creative moves yourself, that Trider doesn't have, like sword based ones. Remember variety is a spice of life.
Otherwise a solid 9/10 will definitly follow and read.
As soon as I read this I thought of her:
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This part left me a bit confused as I don't know who is talking to who exactly.
Otherwise this is a great chapter. And don't worry about it being on par with my story, you are writing it how you see fit. And quite honestly I could actually see this being in my story.
Good job and keep on writing your best.
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Oh that...I guess I didn't have anyone realize that, huh? You see, he was talking about his own son.
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I got that, and now that I've read it again, I see there is no problem at all. At first I thought that you wrote Stephen twice in the sentence, but I guess I just read it too fast. My bad. Nothing wrong at all with that sentence.