just another brony with random story ideas.
WARNING - THIS TALE CONTAINS ANTHROPOMORPHIC PONIES AND DRAGONS AND GRYPHONS AND ETC!
Twilight Sparkle, star pupil of Princess Celestia is being sent away to...attend HIGH SCHOOL?! The shocked pony is thrown into a chaotic teenagers world of bullying, tardiness, and cupcakes? Join her as she discovers the power of friendship and overcomes new hardships.
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Not sure whats with the thumbs down. Stories not horrible or a grammatical time bomb or anything. If i may though, INDENT YOUR DAMN PARAGRAPHS!
Other then that, some sizes and descriptions would help a lot. You should never just give a characters name, you should describe a character and then have their name come up.
Example: A tall, thin, purple Unicorn in a light blue tank top and jeans sat on the edge of her bed, letting her long legs hang off. Her lilac eyes blinked as she reread the letter in her hands. She used one of her hands to pull at her medium length, dark with a pink stripe down the middle hair. (Then Spike's description after she complains) "Hey she is sending me to this school too, Twilight. Just calm down.
And like this, we now know what our characters look like, as well as, her name. This should be done in any fic, but especially if your altering character appearances, such as making them anthro.
Seems interesting enough to warrent watching.
1173122 Well thank you. I hope to update this soon but I am still having issues with my elbow and the hospital has decided they aren't going to answer my calls.
1173164 Ahh, well no rush, I'm fine waiting.
1173171 So I've gotten better at writing and have found time to get back on this. Starting with fixing this god-awful mess of a chapter. Sorry for the long wait!
2372505 Haha, no problem. Glad to see you're getting back into the swing of things
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