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Draxonos135


Hello everyone, Draxonos135 here. I mostly focus on Equestria Girls fanfics, and the one thing I like to do most is bring some kind of positive emotion to my readers.

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It's the day of the month in Ponyville's school, where a mare reads a story to the young fillies and foals.

However, the usual go-to mare, Twilight Sparkle, has become unavailable after becoming Princess of Friendship.

Luckily, she has one person in mind who could replace her...

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Comments ( 6 )

"Mrs." Moondancer? So, she's married?

To think I'd ever get to meet a friend of one of the princesses. I mean, I've known Twilight for a long time, but I don't think I've ever seen one of her friends before.

She... She lives in Ponyville, and has never met any of Twilight's friends?

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I thought Mrs. was the formal title for an unmarried woman.

Also, alternate universe... That's the only answer I got, sorry. XD

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Miss. Miss Moondancer is what you're looking for.

Nice work, dude! Your prose is pretty solid.

I would like to see you spend a little more time thinking through your plots though. Overall it was fine, but small details like Cheerilee traveling all the way to Canterlot to find someone to read to the foals seem out of place.

Not a bad effort. Hope to see more from you :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the compliment.

Yeah, I guess I could've thought about the plot a little bit better.

But hey , sometimes you get so inspired, you want to get something done before it leaves, and forget to think things through.

Or is that only me? XD

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